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Faith Debased

By Jordon Lynn

<Author's Comments> I was recently called to task for a faux pas I made in chapter 4 concerning a woman's specific anatomy when I described Faith enviously watching Regina's Adam's Apple bob as she swallowed the majority of Cal's hot load. Now, being able to run my hand down my own throat, I am well aware of the fact that a woman does not possess this particular knot of masculine gristle in her throat. However, as I attempted to argue back to my precise-minded detractor, the vast majority of the audience, not only at ES, but almost any erotic site, is predominately male. And, since I do my best to write to the majority of my audience, the mental picture of an Adam's Apple bobbing up and down, I felt, would be a more recognizable image for the male mind, in an overheated state of bliss, to grasp than that of a woman's graceful throat working as she swallows.

I was also called on a grammatical error, one my spell check, nor I, caught. I went back and proof read the chapter for probably the tenth time, and, sure enough, I had used wonton (not once, but twice) in place of wanton; a sort of Chinese matzo soup versus a licentious adjective. Hummm.....? That does have some decidedly licentious culinary possibilities.

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