Message In A Bottle (fm:one-on-one, 5404 words) | |||
Author: hotscribe | |||
Added: Feb 28 2003 | Views / Reads: 1119 / 875 [78%] | Story vote: 9.75 (4 votes) | |
The original version of an entry for the ES challenge story competition. A nautically themed boy-meets-girl story with a romantic edge. | |||
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Message In A Bottle"CRANK, CRANK," I scream at the top of my lungs, "TRIM THE FUCKING MAINSAIL OUT...TRIM THE FUCKING MAINSAIL.
I know Jason can hear me. He loves my competitive spirit and the fact I swear like a true sailor in the heat of a race. It's probably why he defies maritime tradition and lets a waif of a girl man the cockpit and scream relayed instructions to the crew from the mainsheet tactician.
Salt spray spews across the open deck as the crew frantically work the grinders, and the Witch's bow plows downwind from the tack away from the inner marker. We're so close behind the Antaya that I can see the helmsman's face clearly as he barks commands. It's the perfect position, and I look back at Jason and see him grinning broadly. We both know we've got them; the Witch is unbeatable in a downwind sprint.
The mainsail of the Antaya droops in sagging ripples from the spoiled air, and she wallows in the swell. We'll be a full boat length ahead before their sail fills. They'll never catch the Witch. This one is ours.
Reveling in the crisp morning air scented heavily with the smells of the sea, I jog along the beach. There's only the sound of lapping waves and ...
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