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Four Becomes Two

Dear Readers:

I am so thrilled to be receiving the response that I have received. You have humbled this writer with your words of praise, and made me think with your words of criticism. I owe the upcoming chapter(s) to you, hoping that what you have inspired, I have been able to convey.

Thank you,

Jay

P.S. Thanks for the pressure. J

As always, this author craves feedback. Criticism only makes me a better writer. Please respond to Jaylovenj@comcast.net. I look forward to hearing from you.

Four Become Two: Chapter 18

"...Alright, detective, we'll be there," I hear Greg say as I exit the shower. I had awaken ahead of him. Poor baby! He had expended so much energy last night that he didn't realize that I had watched him sleep for about a half hour before giving in to the pressure of my morning ...

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