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Creative writing, part two

A soon as I started reading I knew that this chapter couldn't have been written by the person who wrote the first chapter. I don't know much about writing, but I do know that inexpierenced authors tend to either write in the first person or in the third. Never in both. "Hey" I said to Robert "this is ...." Before I could finish my sentence he answered: "Yes, I know. It's another author. Read it first, we'll discuss it later."

"Confessions, chapter two.

"Do you have a place we can go to?" Nicole pressed her body against Mary's, massaging her buttocks through her sweatpants. Though Mary's loose-fitting sports-outfit prohibited any serious bodily contact, Mary nevertheless felt Nicole's firm little breasts press against her bigger, heavier ones, and instinctively pushed back. A tingle ran from her nipples down to her spine. The carressing, tickling fingers on her behind made her almost squirm with pleasure. "Yessss" she sighed. "Let's go to my place. I'm alone for the night." "No honey, you're not" Nicole whispered back. "I'll be with you. Oh, how I'll be with you." Then she took a step back and with a broad grin on her face put both her hands on Mary's shoulders and turned her towards her locker, saying "Come on lover, get dressed. I'll wait for you at reception."

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