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The Girls All Get Prettier (At Closing Time) by Jake Rivers ©

Authors note: This story is very loosely based on Mickey Gilley's great song:

"The girls all get prettier at closing time ... They all begin to look like movie stars When the change starts taking place It puts a glow on every face Of the falling angels of the back street bars"

Thanks to Techsan and Lady Cibelle for their first-rate editing help.

This is written in colloquial Texan (and edited by a Texan) so I beg patience for that. If you don't know the song you probably won't get too much out of the story.

JAKE

"Hey, Jake! How about that one? Damn, a nine for sure. Oh, hell, she's with that big shouldered bull rider."

I turned my head to see what Hank was looking at. Man, he wasn't kidding. An easy nine. And that looked like Pete Ayres - he was the guy that rode Bodacious inta the ground over in Amarillo and took the prize money. Yeah, I remembered ...

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