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My stories on ES are usually well received. Some of the readers who vote also include a comment and I enjoy that. In the first few days after posting a new story I'll receive a handful of very satisfying notes on ES mail telling me that it's a great story, often with a line or two about what they most enjoyed about the story. I also from time to time get notes telling me something they don't like about the story, which is sometimes constructive, sometimes not. I get some mail asking me to feature a particular thing, like more foot descriptions or a specific hair style. Some tell me about their wives or girlfriends, past and present. I've even gotten a few pictures, telling me how much the description of the woman in the story resembles their woman.

The notes I most enjoy, though, are the ones from women telling me in varying degrees of detail how they enjoyed the story and sometimes what it did for them. One of my favorites is a note from a young female reader telling me that after reading my story about a female character's first anal experience she got so hot and wet that she was determined to let her boyfriend break her anal cherry. Sadly, I never got word of whether it happened or not and if it did happen how she liked it. I hope I was of some service.

Another note I appreciated was from an ES reader named Carol, about the story "Pati finally gets into Kelly's sweet panties", concerning a true fmf experience I wrote about. She wasn't shy with her comments: "Made my panties damp. I'd like to get into both girls' panties and ...

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