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WHAT IF?

What if instead of setting an elaborate stage, creating so much chaos, and distracting everyone from the original topic... What if I had just told the story of Jeff and Kim? The story I had intended to tell before I got sidetracked with trying to top ALICIA. Kim was 3 dimensional and believable, a woman in her 30's conflicted by the love her husband didn't give her and the love her stepson wanted to. Jeff was real because beyond his lust, he truly cared for Kim and wanted more than the sex they shared. The heat between Kim and Jeff was legendary and believable, but adding Sarah, her sister, her mom, and all of Jeff's stepmoms was just insanity on the level of ALICIA AND THE BIKINI STORE.

So now I am pressing reset, using part of the original story to lay the groundwork, and seeing if the lust and chemistry between Jeff and Kim is enough to tell their story. This time without mayhem, chaos and nonsense. Obviously to get the story rolling, parts of it will be copied from STEP KIM, but the majority of this will be original writing and all new characters. Sarah, Hope and others simply do not exist. There will be no multiple partners, the "Ex Club" or stepmoms everywhere throwing themselves at Jeff. What there will be is heat, lust and love... and the consequences of that forbidden relationship. If it works, we all win, if it doesn't, well it was worth a shot. With some luck, some careful thought, and good intentions, I present to you ...

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