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Quite simply put, you HAVE to read parts 1 and 2 to understand what is going on. It would take at least half this part to recap and summarize what happened and how we got here, so please just go read Melanie and April's origin stories. There wouldn't be a story if not for the ‘SHOCK COLLAR' erotic toon by writer and artist SHADMAN/SHADBASE. Any descriptions of that toon will occur in the story as part of conversation to avoid duplication. The switch between Melanie's and April's point of view and narration should be obvious when it occurs. This is my first attempt at a dual narrative. In the future, scenes, conversations, even entire parts may be of just Melanie or April. It all depends on how the story goes, how well it's received, and what kind of trouble the girls get themselves into.

Any people, places, names, products or events mentioned are done so without permission or endorsement, this is a work of fiction.

Melanie - 34 years old, 5' 10", blue eyes, long blonde hair and a fit, shapely body. Ryan - 19 years old, 5' 11", hazel eyes, short brown hair, and a fit, firm body. April - 27 years old, 6', green eyes, long red hair, and an athletic body. Jake - 20 years old, 5' 10", light blue eyes, short blonde hair, strong athletic body.

--------------------- MELANIE ----------------------------------

Ryan and I had just finished having sweaty, breathtaking sex. We crawled ...

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