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Jessie spoke again. "Slut, I've taken off your headphones so you can hear my orders. Cal is going to keep his mouth shut when he isn't eating so he won't be saying much. Clear?"

I hear the faint ping of the ball gag release, then Tams answered. "Yes, Mistress."

"Now suck on this, that's what your mouth is for." I hear the familiar sounds of Tams sucking, the eager noise she makes in the back of her throat... Tams started moaning, I realized Jessie was eating her while she sucked.

I was rock hard, listening to my wife suck on the stranger Jessie had given her to. Tams was moaning louder, her rhythm was off, she was making little gasps and cries as Jessie teased her, bringing her closer and closer to orgasm... Her cries got louder, whoever it was had pulled out of her mouth.

"Fuck her, Cal! Fuck her like there's no tomorrow."

Tams cried out as she was thrust into, then again in sync with the slapping of her flesh. It was fast, rough.. Crack! Tams wailed... Crack! "Mistress!!!"

"Too rough, slut?" The sound reached a crescendo, Tams screamed in orgasm, moaning as the steady pumping continued, she gave that little gasp of disappointment she always makes when I pull out, then groaned a few seconds later as the thrusts started again.

Suddenly there was a hand on my cock, I groaned around the gag as it pumped and drove me straight to orgasm, my semen jetting out. The hand milked me, getting every last bit of cum it could, as Tams cried under the constant thrusts.

"Cal, pull out and come on her face."

The thrusting stopped, there was a faint sound like raindrops...

"That looks great, Cal's semen all over your face. We'll let it dry like that. I'm putting your headphones back on, we'll be back with you in a bit."

I heard Jess's steps approach, then the headphones were pulled off my head. Jess's voice was smug. "Did Cal enjoy his little handjob?"

I nodded, still gagged, then heard a chair dragged across the floor. The ball gag was removed and my face was pulled into Jessie's cunt. "You're going to eat me, then fuck the slut within an inch of her life. Don't keep me waiting."

I obeyed, servicing the Mistress.

****

Jessie screamed hoarsely in orgasm, holding me tightly to her. Her thighs were clamped around my head, I could barely get any air in as I continued to lick feverishly, hoping this would be the last one. Jessie shuddered as the waves of pleasure rocked through her. Suddenly she pushed me away. "Enough." She stood, moved behind me, and released the restraints. "Stretch. Yes, now that way. Good, you should be able to stand. Upsy-daisy."

I was a little unsteady, my legs tingled a little, then I straightened up, pulled the blindfold off, and looked down on Jessie. I kept the anger from my face, but I wanted to slap her, to punish her, to ... I pushed the feeling away. We just trusted the wrong person. At least I'm the one fucking my wife next.

Jessie gestured down at Tams. "I think I gave her a good time, let's see if you can do better."

I looked over Tams. Her cunt was wet and open, cruel stripes from the quirt marred her lovely breasts, semen - whose? - was spattered across her face.

I told myself she needed me, needed me to claim her again, to protect her... I lined up and drove into her sopping wet cunt. Tams rocked under my thrusts, crying out in surprise and pleasure.

"Cal! Don't stop! Please!" I pumped faster, harder, hesitant to go all out, her voice rose over the pounding of my heartbeat as I drove into her faster, harder, her hips were humping up to meet each thrust, my entire being was focused on fucking, on taking my wife back for my own. I came with a thrust that drove the breath out of Tams, then another, pumping like a madman. Finally, I slowed and stopped. I was ready to collapse... NO. I pushed myself to my feet and staggered to the end of the bench, then brought my cock to Tams' lips.

"Suck me. Suck me clean with that little cocksucking mouth." Tams obeyed, and I reclaimed her mouth as my own.

Jessie stood to the side, watching silently until I pulled away. "Very good, Cal. Now release my slut and fetch us all a beverage."

I drove my fury down and obeyed. Monday. Monday I would tell Tams that I couldn't do it any more, that this little bitch had to leave. I just had to keep the secret for the rest of our lives.

****

I sat at the end of the couch, Tams cuddled into my side. Jessie was at the other end, gazing at us with a slight smile. That little...words failed me. I looked away, dropping my eyes to focus on Tams, calming my breath and fury.

Jessie suddenly spoke. "I think you're both a little spent, we should rest a bit and watch some entertainment."

She raised the remote and turned on the TV, to show our living room. Tams tied to the bench, me kneeling to the side, and Jessie smiling down at us both. What? She's going to show us right now? I put my arm around Tams, holding her tight. She looked up at me with concern on her face. I couldn't meet her eye, as I waited for Jessie to start the video.

I kept my eyes averted from the screen, telling myself that Tams would not want me to see her humiliation, her conquest by another. I watched her face, waiting for the shock and horror I knew was coming. Her eyes widened. "Jessie! You didn't!" Her voice was amused, teasing, like nothing was the matter...

I dragged my eyes to the screen, to take in the tableau I couldn't bear to see - Me kneeling, Tams on the bench, Jessie beside her ... and a tall, red headed woman, caressing my wife's glorious breasts. The 'other man' was Cheryl.

We watched the whole thing - every caress, every kiss, every thrust of Cheryl's strapon into Tams, every cry of pleasure and every moan of pain at the touch of the quirt. We watched Cheryl jerk me off and flick my semen on Tam's face, then sit and pull my mouth to her cunt. We watched as I ate Cheryl through 4 orgasms, watched her push me away and walk out of the room.

We watched me screw Tams like a man possessed, heard her moans of ecstasy mingled with the slap of our flesh and my angry growls. We watched me come with a furious shout, watched me pull out and push my cock in her mouth, fucking her face until I softened and pulled away.

****

"You devious little wench."

Jessie smirked across the table at me. "What, Cal? you didn't enjoy it? Tams sure did."

I opened my mouth to reply, then caught the twinkle in her eye. "You...let me hear that on purpose. Did you know, Tams?"

Jessie replied firmly. "Of course I let you hear, and no I didn't tell Tams."

"And you, Cheryl? What do you have to say?"

She gave me a level look. "I don't answer to you, Cal. I'm here to celebrate Jessie's birthday. I will say you make a good party favor. You're not too bad with your tongue - for a man."

Tams reached over to take my hand. "Jessie is Mistress for the weekend. And we never said no one else could join in."

I met her eye, took a deep breath and let it out, and turned to Jessie. "Thank you, Mistress. How can we serve you next?"

"Make us some lunch, Cal. And you will address Cheryl as Ma'am, obey her as you would me."

I pursed my lips and practically spat my answer. "Yes, Mistress. And Ma'am."

I started to stand, Cheryl snapped at me. "Crawl, Boy! Your head doesn't rise above ours in our sight."

"Yes, Ma'am." I lowered myself to the floor and crept into the kitchen to fix some lunch.

****

I finished licking the crumbs from my plate and sat back on my heels. Three sets of female eyes were on me.

Cheryl was the first to speak. "Slut, clear the dishes. Boy, get your ass over here." She gestured to the floor at her feet, I complied to kneel before her, then bowed my head at her gesture. She lifted a leg to place her foot on my shoulder, then crossed her other leg over it. She turned her face to Jessie. "Mistress, do you mind if I take charge of this useless lump?"

Jessie had a smirk on her face. "Go right ahead. Slut and I will watch and give helpful suggestions."

Cheryl took her feet off my shoulder and sat forward to look down at me. Her expression was...not comforting. "Useless Lump! Stand over there! Face the wall." I stood where she indicated, my arms at my sides.

She stepped in front of me, looked at my crotch with a sneer, then up at my face. "Stand straight. Position 6!"

It took a moment to register, then I put my hands behind my head, elbows spread wide.

She stalked around me a few times, then...Crack! The quirt struck across my buttocks, I made myself stay rigid...Crack! Crack! The backs of my calves were her next target, I gritted my teeth and took it. She circled me, striking occasionally at various parts of my anatomy. She came close to my crotch a couple of times, it took all my willpower to not drop my hands to cover myself.

After a few minutes, the blows stopped, I heard a whispered conversation, then Cheryl stepped to my back and ran her hands over my shoulders and down my sides. "You should hit the gym, Lump. Your big-titted bitch deserves a real man." She reached around, took my cock in her right hand. "And this little thing? How do you make her come with this?" She worked her hand, my cock hardened and started to rise. "Well, at least it's hooked up." She released my erection, brought her hands up to my chest and took a firm grip on my nipples. "I understand you enjoy this kind of thing."

She gave both nipples a sudden, hard twist. I stiffened and grunted as pain radiated across my chest, gritting my teeth again and swallowing as I tried to ignore it. She released them and lowered her hands to my crotch. I flinched in anticipation...she gently cupped my balls, then caressed the length of my rock hard shaft. She stepped in front of me, looking down at my erection with a smirk. "Ladies, you ready for him?" I didn't hear a reply, but Cheryl seemed satisfied.

"Lump, can you hold position, or should we be nice and tie you up?"

"I can hold position." I took a deep breath. "Ma'am."

****

I was on my back on the floor, arms by my sides. Jessie came over with the blindfold and tied it in place, and I waited.

I didn't wait long, someone moved to stand above me, then knelt over me and lowered her cunt to my mouth. Cheryl's voice urged me to get to work, I obeyed like a good boy. After a minute, hands started to caress my stomach, my thighs...someone's lips took in the head of my cock and sucked gently, then pulled away. I flexed my hips upward and was rewarded with a hard slash across my stomach with the quirt.

"Bad Lump! You move your mouth and nothing else!"

It was hard to obey, but I managed. I finally brought the woman on me to orgasm, enduring the gentle caresses and teasing fellatio. She got off me and was immediately replaced, at Cheryl's curt order I got back to work.

This woman humped her cunt against my mouth, I thought it might be Tams, but the constant gentle stimulation of my cock was REALLY distracting. Every time I thought my orgasm might be on the way, they backed off, caressing all around my cock, until the urgency had faded and they went back to slow, teasing sucking and stroking.

I don't know how long it took, but Jessie finally cried out in orgasm as she pulled my head to her by my hair. Immediately she got up and a third woman - or maybe the first one again - settled onto my mouth. She was already excited, it didn't take long before she was bucking against my mouth and moaning. She carefully lifted away from my face, then stood. The hands and lips left my crotch, Cheryl's voice whispered on the edge of hearing. A moment later, a woman knelt over me and lowered herself to engulf my rock hard erection.

The sensation was glorious, intense, and ... I lifted my hands to grip the hips above me and thrust hard. She cried out, her voice unsteady as my rapid thrusts drove her higher, she was gasping for breath above me, my orgasm rose... I came hard, thrusting up and pulling her hips down to meet me. A few more thrusts and I let go of her hips, dropping my hands to my sides and resting. She pushed away from me and stood, my pulse slowed, my breathing quieted, then Cheryl's voice came again. I realized I had no idea who I had just fucked.

"You have been a very naughty lump! Now the slut will have to clean this up." A mouth engulfed my cock, sucking it deep, then pulled off and started licking the sides. "Is he clean, slut?"

Tams' voice was quiet. "Yes, Ma'am."

"Good. Now freshen up the cunt he so disobediently fucked." I heard the gentle sounds of Tams eating a cunt, whoever her companion was kept quiet.

When she had finished, Cheryl pulled my blindfold off and smiled down on me. "You were a very naughty lump. Do you deserve another chance?"

I worked my jaw and gave her an honest answer. "I may not survive another chance." I probably sounded as exhausted as I felt.

"That's OK, we can bring the pizza guy in to take care of Tams." Her tone was joking, but just in case...

"I'll die trying."

Jessie called out. "Oh, stop teasing him. He's been a very good boy this evening. We all need showers, Cal will be our obedient, humble bathing assistant. Then we can get ready for bed."

Bathing beautiful women - it's a difficult job, but someone has to do it!

I was used to washing Tams and Jessie, their bodies were home territory, every curve part of a familiar journey. I cleaned them thoroughly, fondled them the way I knew they liked, cupped their breasts from behind while kissing their necks...

When Cheryl stepped into the shower, I was suddenly shy. I looked at the wall, my feet, anywhere but the lithe body inches away from mine. I stood waiting, hoping she would, I guess, take care of herself.

Cheryl got tired of waiting. "I heard you were good at this, Lump. Show me."

Jolted alert, I reached for the shampoo bottle. "Is this an acceptable brand, Ma'am?"

She glanced at it, nodded. "That will do." I squeezed a blob into my hand, then started washing her hair. It felt odd for a moment to be massaging a scalp with such short hair, then I got into the flow of things and went to work.

Her hair rinsed, I picked up the body wash and started at her shoulders.

"No washcloth?" Cheryl sounded amused.

I blinked in surprise and pulled my hands away. "I don't usually use one, I could ask Tams to grab one if you like. Ma'am."

She shook her head. "No, continue. I just thought ..."

"Thought I was just groping you for the fun of it?" I was soaping her arm, took her hand and did the same.

She turned to offer he other arm. "Well, yes. But you seem so...careful. Like you want it done right."

I finished her arm, knelt, and started washing her legs. I may have spent a little more time than necessary on her inner thighs, but I like to be thorough. It's a shame I don't have a foot fetish, hers are really quite nice.

After I finished her feet, I stood, stepped in close, and reached around to scrub her back. Her pert breasts pressed into my chest, my hands covered her with suds, I reached down to cup her ass. Pulling back a little, I guided her to face away, then started washing her front. Cupping her breasts from behind, sliding my hands over her lovely flesh, I went on to wash her stomach, then carefully brought my hands below her waist.

"I do want it done right. But be assured I'm enjoying this very much."

"That's obvious." She reached back and found my erection, gently stroked it, then let go. I carefully soaped her crotch then turned her to the spray, rinsing her thoroughly. My fingers gently stroked along her slit, then found her clit. "Would Ma'am like me to spend more time on this?"

She leaned her weight against me, gave a little sigh as I teased her clit. "I think you should be very thorough, Cal. Ah! Yes, just like - Oh! - that."

I complied, gently inserting a finger and bringing my other hand to massage her clit. "Happy to oblige, Ma'am."

Another sigh, she was slowly bucking her hips, I moved to her front, leaned her back against the wall, two of my fingers gently pumping in her cunt. I dipped my head to her breast, circling the nipple with my tongue then nipping at it with my teeth.

"Hey! Ah!" I rubbed her clit vigorously, with three fingers pumping vigorously inside her. I kept rubbing, her cunt was clenching on my fingers, she threw back her head and screamed in orgasm. She looked ready to collapse, I pulled away then took her waist in both hands, holding her steady and pressing her to the shower wall.

"How's that, Ma'am?"

She stared back with a dazed expression, then glanced down at my raging erection. "Are you going to..."

I raised a hand to her chin, lifted her face to look up at mine. "I'm going to do whatever you tell me to do, Ma'am."

She blinked, looked down again. "I thought you wanted to..."

I chuckled. "Of course I want to! I want to screw you against the wall, to bend you over and rail you from behind, to push you to your knees and teach you to suck my cock like a submissive little slut. Today, what I'm going to do is whatever you tell me to do. Ma'am."

She took a deep breath and looked down again. "You know I'm a lesbian, right?"

"You know it still fits, right?"

She hesitated, then gave a half smile. "I suppose the nice thing to do is return the favor." She brought both hands to my cock and started gently pumping. I leaned forward and pressed my forehead to the tile, enjoying her inexpert but still very enjoyable handjob. It didn't take long until I stiffened, groaned, and shot my load on her stomach.

I sighed and straightened up. "Thank you, Ma'am. Will there be anything else, Ma'am?"

"The water is getting cold. Turn it off."

I spent a moment rinsing my semen from her, then obeyed.

I took my time toweling her dry, careful to cover every inch of her skin. We stepped into the bedroom together, Tams and Jessie were sitting together on the bed reading. They looked up, dropped their books, and started clapping.

I glanced over at Cheryl, she was turning red as she replied. "Bite me."

"What took so long, Cal? Did you get her extra clean?"

"Ma'am is very tall, of course it takes longer to properly bathe her." I managed to keep a straight face, Cheryl giggled and relaxed.

"That was fun. I very much enjoyed showering with Cal, I may want to do it again."

Jessie and Tams started laughing, Cheryl looked between them in confusion. "What's so funny?"

Jessie settled down, then explained. "Current appearances aside, Cal is dominant, and in the shower he is very, very dominant. If you ask him into the shower with you and don't tell him it is JUST a shower, you are asking him to use you however he wants, as long as he wants. That's one of the 'do-whatever-the-fuck-you-want-to-me' words. Now you know. If you're particularly brave, you'll insult his manhood again, so he has motivation to really show you what he's made of."

"So if I wanted ..."

"So if you wanted to experience what he can do with those broad shoulders and big hands and all the rest of his equipment, it's easy enough to arrange. He won't cheat on Tams, but if you ask and she gives permission...."

Cheryl looked over at me in speculation. "I'll keep that in mind, it could be ..." She trailed off when she met my eye and took in my predatory expression, then looked away. I noticed her nipples had perked right up, though.

As a useless lump, I got a sleeping bag on the floor. Tams was secured spread-eagled on the bed, I listened to the orgy until they all got tired, then slept and dreamed of soft women tied to a firm bed.

****

I woke with a start, realized where I was, and rolled on my back. I contemplated waking up Jessie for a quick blowjob, but it WAS her birthday celebration, she deserved a night off. It was almost dawn, I decided to get breakfast ready.

Tams and I finished eating from our dishes on the floor, then asked for permission to clear the table.

A few minutes later, we were summoned to the living room. We crawled in and took position 2 in front of Jessie and Cheryl. They opened their knees wide and gestured us forward. We obeyed, and bent our heads to service them.

They swapped places after they had both come, swapped again a few minutes later, then had us pull away.

Jessie smiled down on us. "That's a pretty good start. I think Cheryl has some good ideas, she will be directing you both for a while."

They had obviously planned this out, Cheryl started barking orders immediately. In less than 5 minutes I was bound and gagged again, kneeling to the side of the room. Tams was almost spread-eagle on the bench, her feet flat on the floor, ankles tied together by a rope passing under the bench.

Cheryl stood above her, sneering. "Do you know when I started hating you, Slut?"

"No, Mistress."

"I went to see Jess at work, to beg forgiveness, to ask her to come back to me. It had only been a week! And there you were, flirting with her. Bold as brass, your tits practically bursting out of your top, acting the slut that you are. You had a wedding ring! And she looked at you like you were sent from heaven."

She raised the quirt in her hand, looked down with a cruel smile.

"I wanted to punish you, to hurt you, to claw you eyes out. Now here you are, helpless."

I was starting to get worried, I was as securely tied as Tams. We were literally at her mercy.

She raised the quirt, sent it slashing down and yanked it back short, almost making contact with Tams' cheek.

"But Jess was happy. So I walked away before she saw me."

"And a few months later she was moping around because you dropped her. I went to see her and she wouldn't open the door. Even dumped she preferred you to me. Must have been these tits, I guess."

She leaned down, used the quirt to toy with a nipple, then drew it back and ...Crack! Tams gave a shriek as pain shot through her breast.

"And then, she's back with you, and you're whoring her out to this useless lump over here, turning my sweet innocent Jess into a cocksucking .." Crack! There was a stripe across Tam's other nipple. "..Slut.." Crack! This one hit just above her crotch. "..for this.." She stepped in front of me and raised the quirt. "..FUCKING PERVERT!!" Pain shot through me as she slashed the quirt across both nipples.

"So you see where I'm coming from, slut?"

Tams nodded, her eyes full of fear.

Cheryl squatted down next to Tams, gently caressed her breast with one hand. "But I see what Jess sees in you. These really are spectacular. And you've taught Jess so many wonderful things. So we're done with this." She tossed the quirt aside. "And I'm going to kiss it and make it better. She knelt and brought her lips to Tams' breast, gently kissing, then sucking. Tams winced from the contact with her abused flesh, but arched her back, thrusting her breasts up, then gasped as Cheryl brought a hand to her cunt and thrust 2 fingers inside.

Jess had joined them, kissing Tams on the lips, then finding the spot on her neck that worked so well... She had a thick dildo in her hand, and big as the strapon we used to welcome Tams home from her trip. Cheryl lowered herself onto Tams' mouth, then smiled as Tams started eating her. Jess positioned herself carefully, then pushed the dildo all the way in with one thrust.

Tams cried out in surprise, then again when Jess applied a vibrator to her clit. She bucked her hips up, moved them side to side, trying to get away from the sensations that overwhelmed her.

Cheryl got an annoyed look on her face and gave a sharp slap to the side of Tams' right breast. "Stop slacking off!" She started moving her hips against Tams' mouth, then bent down to push aside Jessie's hand and bring her mouth to Tams' clit.

Cheryl moved on Tams, humping her hips against her mouth while vigorously eating her snatch. Her movements became more eager, even frantic as Tams strained against her bonds, she threw her head back to scream in orgasm, then lifted her hips to allow Tams to do the same.

She rested a moment, then pushed herself up and dismounted. "That was very nice, slut. Good work."

Tams took a deep breath. "Thank you, Ma- Ah!"

Jessie held her nipple in a tight grip. "Cheryl is done with the quirt, slut. I am not. Now shut up." She let go Tam's nipple, then pushed the ball gag in her mouth and fastened it tightly. She reached down to the dildo in Tams and gave it a little wiggle. "Is this too small for you, slut? Maybe want to get stretched out a little more?"

Tams shook her head and mumbled behind the gag.

"What's that? You want something bigger? No problem!"

Tams nodded in resignation, then sighed as Jessie pulled out the dildo and dropped it in her bag. Jessie bent down and felt Tams' cunt. "Come here, Cheryl. I can practically fit my hand in here."

Cheryl squatted down next to her. "Yeah? Prove it!"

Jessie rummaged in her bag, pulled out a tube of lube, squeezed a large glob onto her hand, and showed it to me. "See, Cal? We're taking good care of our slut!" She smeared it on Tams, then slowly pushed her full hand inside Tams' cunt.

I watched my wife's eyes widen, she moaned around the gag, then inhaled sharply. Jessie was moving her arm, pumping her hand in and out an inch or so. Cheryl looked over at me and whispered in Jessie's ear. Jessie nodded. Cheryl stepped in front of me and squatted to look me in the eyes. "I think the Lump needs a better look. Come here, Lump!" She released the clips holding my wrists to my ankles and took a good grip on my ear. With that encouragement, I was able to inch my way across to the bench, then stand and look down on the action.

Jessie is a small girl with petite hands, she had managed to get her hand fully inside Tams, and at least an inch past her wrist.

"Go ahead, Jess. Make a fist." I saw the muscles of Jessie's forearm flex, Tams gave out a groan. "You see that, Lump? You're going to need to strap a board to your ass so you don't fall in."

Jessie pulled back, squirted more lube on her arm and wrist, and smeared it around with her free hand. "Brace yourself, slut!" Tams threw back her head as Jessie's fist drove inside her, slowly pulled back, then began pumping in and out. Tams tossed her head side-to-side, I realized she was close to coming from the stimulation. Her cries leaked around the ball gag, rising with each thrust, she went rigid for a moment and started thrashing, straining against the restraints as the intense orgasm tore through her body.

Jessie pulled her hand out of Tams while Cheryl released the ball gag, Tams lay limply, taking in deep breaths that slowed with her heartbeat.

"There, that wasn't so bad, was it, Slut?"

Tams lifted her head to respond. "No, Mistress."

"Lump is going to fuck you now, unless you chicken out. Can you take it?"

Tams shifted her focus to my cock, jutting straight out in an incredibly hard erection. "Of course, Mistress."

They removed my restraints and shoved me in Tams direction. "You heard us, Lump. Begin."

There really was no point in foreplay, Tams was wet and wide open, I was extremely aroused. Penetration was odd - she was soft, warm, wet, but she had never felt so loose before. Loose or not, she responded to my thrusts enthusiastically, bucking her hips and crying out. It didn't take me long to grunt and thrust hard, spewing my semen deep inside her.

I lowered myself to kiss her, then to whisper in her ear. "You doing OK?"

She nodded against me. "So far."

****

After we served them lunch, Jessie and Cheryl conferred in the other room, then Jessie came in to speak with us.

"That's 24 hours. Are you chickening out?"

I met Tams' eyes, we shook our heads together, I answered aloud. "No. We can take it, Mistress."

"Good. Here's what we are going to do..."

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