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THE PRICE OF PERFECTION 1 (fm:seduction, 6187 words)

Author: jwdoney
Added: May 24 2025Views / Reads: 1141 / 1040 [91%]Story vote: 9.32 (16 votes)
Jeff gets both LOVE and SEX at first sight with smart, sassy and beautiful Melanie, and everything seems perfect for the sudden, very hot for each other couple, until Melanie takes Jeff home and surprises him with a twist I have never used before.
 


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Something different combined with more of the same.

This story was inspired by a porn clip that I had to watch three times. It was that hot. While so many porn clips skip the tease, seduction and ‘story' this one was fresh, exciting and may not stay up long before it's cut and diced to prompt viewers to ‘subscribe' to something or follow pop-up cluttered, virus filled links. My point was, the idea was so hot, so fresh, I just had to tell it from my romantic slash tease point of view. None of this happened, women deserve truth and respect, and this is by far my most fictional story that we all may wish could happen to us. Any similarities to work I have written or posted is coincidental and this story should stand alone once it gets truly rolling.

Any people, places, names, products or events mentioned are done so without permission or endorsement, this is a work of fiction. Names were chosen randomly then selected to fit the character and situation.

My name is Jeff, I am 18 years old, stand 6' with short black hair, hazel eyes, bright smile and good nature. Thanks to porn and girls who like to flirt and tease, I am nearly always horny and cannot wait to finally have sex. Being a virgin at 18 seems like a curse, both of my ex-girlfriends didn't want to ‘cure' me of it, and while I have gotten close, I have yet to actually have sex.

Then suddenly everything changed.

I work as a cashier at a local grocery store and have been there since 10th grade, just over two years. Once I graduated high school and decided to skip college, I was given more hours, closer to 30, sometimes 35. I don't need to work, my parents have money and my truck is paid for. I just like to work because it's how I met both of my ex-girlfriends. Wednesday started like any other day, I got there, clocked in, rang up customers, got carts and helped stock the candy and impulse items up front. The CSM is a cool guy in his 40's named Rick, and he's fair but firm. I was stocking bags when he called me over and said "I have good news and bad news for you." I sighed "Lay it on me." Rick said "I want you to train the new cashier when she gets here."

I blinked.

Was that the good news or the bad?

I laughed "That didn't seem so bad", but Rick said "It's not. The bad news is that I need you to work tomorrow on your day off so we can hopefully get her ready for the weekend rush." I sighed. Giving up a day off sucked, but to be honest all I planned to do was watch porn, play XBOX, and laugh when mom complains how lazy I am. Besides, while this store is always busy, especially around 8am, noon and 4pm, the weekends are usually very busy. I asked "Does this mean I can finally work the desk?" Rick stared at me for a moment then said "Get Melanie ready within two weeks and my answer is yes."

Melanie? I had never met anyone named Melanie.

I was about to get back on my register when I asked Rick "So which part of that was the good news?" Rick blushed, glanced around, then said "You'll see." I was confused so I asked "See what? I don't understand." Rick huffed "Just chill, you'll see" then he said "Get back on, we're getting lines."

What happened next is no bullshit, none at all.

I was ringing up a couple of nurses on lunch break from the nearby hospital when one of them gasped "Wow, she's cute." They both blushed and when I turned to look it felt like my entire body shut down. A beautiful blonde about my age stood at the customer service desk talking to Rick and I was frozen, stunned, stalled and mesmerized. She was about 5' 10", had long, light blonde hair, bright blue eyes, was fit, toned, tan and perfect. Even better, she had on one of the shortest blue miniskirts I have ever seen and her tight half top bared her firm stomach and abdomen while showcasing her full, firm chest.

My God she was like the perfect female.

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