The Naked Piano Player (Chapter 9) (ff:one-on-one, 8000 words) [9/9] show all parts | |||
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| Fiona and Laura take up an invitation to watch a private show by Evelyn and Lila. Fiona is enthralled but isn't sure how Lara's going to react. | |||
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with a burlesque strut, crossing one leg over the other to exaggerate the sway of her hips. As she reached the edge, she pivoted sharply, her long blonde hair flying out, and her dress flaring just enough to tease the hint of thigh, before she retreated, back toward the center of the makeshift stage.As Lila retreated, Evelyn moved to meet her in the center, her own motion more calculated and serpentine, with a slower, more deliberate but more twisting sway, her actions smooth, and her shoulder length red hair undisturbed. Fiona’s gaze locked onto her hands as they trailed down her own body, and back up again, unhurriedly and suggestively tracing her curves.
As the music dipped into a low, growling bass line, the two dancers came together, turning around to stand back-to-back. Because they appeared to be exactly the same height, they created a seamless silhouette, the crowns of their heads brushing as they arched their necks in unison. They were a mirrored image of poise, two sides of the same coin.
Then, the symmetry broke. Lila turned within the circle of Evelyn's space, her hands sliding up Evelyn’s silk-clad arms with a slow, deliberate friction. Evelyn tilted her head back, resting it against Lila’s shoulder, her eyes turning to their audience, scanning all five of them, before coming to rest on Fiona. Laura's grip on Fiona's thigh tightened possessively.
Evelyn held Fiona’s gaze as Lila’s fingers traced the delicate line of her collarbone, her touch light but deliberate, each movement a silent dare. The Shimmy Sisters let out a collective exhale, their amusement fading into rapt attention. Fiona’s breath hitched as Evelyn’s lips curved into a smirk, her head still tilted back against Lila, her body pliant under Lila’s exploring hands.
Lila’s fingers drifted lower, skimming the dip between Evelyn’s collarbones before sliding beneath the neckline of her dress. The fabric gave just enough to reveal the swell of Evelyn’s breast - a glimpse, nothing more - before Lila pulled her hand away with a teasing flick of her wrist. Evelyn exhaled sharply, her smirk deepening as she straightened, breaking contact to stride toward the edge of the platform. She paused there, one foot poised on the edge, her hips swaying in time with the music’s languid pulse.
Evelyn's fingers curled around the hem of her dress, lifting it just enough to expose the delicate lace trim of her stockings. She held Fiona’s gaze as she dragged the fabric higher, revealing the taut line of her thigh before letting it drop with a slow, deliberate rustle. The Shimmy Sisters murmured approval - Ruby’s lips parted, Nicole’s fingers twitching against her knee - but Fiona barely registered them. Her world had narrowed to Evelyn’s smirk and the pulse thundering in her ears.
Laura’s fingernails dug into Fiona’s thigh, just shy of painful, as Evelyn pivoted away, letting the dress’s silk whisper against her skin. Lila caught Evelyn’s wrist, spinning her back into the center with a fluid twist that sent Evelyn’s hem flaring higher, flashing a sliver of black lace beneath. The Shimmy Sisters leaned forward in unison, their earlier amusement replaced by something sharper, hungrier.
Lila’s hands slid down Evelyn’s sides, fingers hooking into the delicate straps of her dress, pausing just long enough to make the intention clear, then peeling them down with agonizing slowness. The silk pooled at Evelyn’s elbows, baring her shoulders and the curve of her spine, the fabric catching precariously at her hips. Fiona’s throat went dry. She could see the faint tremor in Evelyn’s fingers, the way her breath shallowed - controlled, but unmistakably affected.
Evelyn’s dress slipped lower, a slow, deliberate descent, until the fabric clung only by the barest friction at her hips. Lila circled her, fingertips trailing across Evelyn’s exposed back, pausing to trace the dimples just above the lace of her panties. Fiona’s breath caught when Evelyn arched into the touch, her body taut as a bowstring, every muscle defined under the dressing room’s warm light.
The dress slipped past Evelyn’s hips, pooling at her feet with a whisper of silk. She stepped out of it with deliberate grace, briefly facing their audience, then turning to face Lila with a smirk that was all challenge. Without breaking eye contact, Evelyn reached for the straps of Lila’s dress, her fingers gripping the fabric firmly, with a possessiveness that mirrored Laura’s grip on Fiona’s thigh.
Evelyn’s smirk sharpened as she tugged just enough to make the straps fall away from Lila’s shoulders. Lila arched an eyebrow, her lips parting in a silent dare, but Evelyn took her time, dragging the straps downward inch by inch, the dress slowly slipping away to reveal the black bra beneath. The Shimmy Sisters watched intently. Fiona felt Laura’s grip tighten further, her nails pressing crescents into Fiona’s skin. A silent reminder of ownership amid the unfolding spectacle.
Lila's dress fell to her hips. Evelyn let it hang there for a moment, savoring the way Lila's breath hitched, then hooked her thumbs under the fabric and dragged it down completely. The silk pooled at Lila's feet, leaving her in nothing but black lace lingerie and stockings, her skin flushed under the dressing room lights. Fiona's pulse thundered in her ears. Laura's fingers flexed against her thigh, possessive and punishing all at once.
The two dancers came together again, turning around to stand back-to-back, a seamless silhouette once more. Then they broke away from each other, but turned and came together again, this time chest to chest, their heads flung back. Then Lila broke away on her own, spinning around her side of the stage, and coming back to Evelyn, this time with her back to Evelyn's front.
Evelyn reached out, her hands skimming Lila's shoulders, then moving lower, finding the scalloped edge of Lila’s bra, her smirk widening as she paused just beneath the center clasp, letting the anticipation build. Fiona certainly felt that anticipation, her entire body thrumming with suspense as she followed every movement on stage with rapt attention.
Evelyn’s fingers lingered at the clasp of Lila’s bra, her gaze flickering to Fiona - a deliberate provocation - before she finally unhooked it with a practiced twist. The straps slid free, the lace slackening against Lila’s skin for a breathless second before Evelyn tugged it away entirely. Lila initially covered her breasts, teasing their audience for a moment, then took her hands away and arched her back, pushing her bare breasts forward, the Shimmy Sisters letting out a collective murmur of approval.
Fiona’s mouth went slack. The sight of Lila’s bare breasts, full and pert, sent a jolt of heat straight to her core. This felt very different from seeing Lila on the club stage. Even though the performance was still taking place on a stage of sorts, it just didn't have the feel of a theatrical performance. It was much more intimate. It was much more sensual. It was much more charged. It was much more thrilling.
Lila straightened and moved toward the front of the platform. She paused there, one foot poised on the edge, her breasts swaying slightly, as she made eye contact in turn with each of the five women watching. Her hands then cupped her breasts with a soft squeeze, making Fiona's skin prickle. Seeing her reaction, Laura tightened her grip on her thigh - equal parts warning and claim.
Lila moved away, back toward the center of the stage, prompting Evelyn to make a move of her own. When their movements were complete, they were together once more, this time with Evelyn's back to Lila's front. After they settled into position, Lila reached out, her hands skimming Evelyn's shoulders, then moving lower. Fiona's breath hitched as she saw Lila's fingers find Evelyn's bra clasp. This was happening again, but in reverse.
Evelyn smirked, turning her head sideways to catch Fiona's gaze, her expression dripping with challenge. Lila's fingers lingered at Evelyn's bra clasp, her nails scraping lightly against the lace, just enough to draw Fiona's gaze downward, to where Evelyn's ribs expanded with each slow breath. Then, with a twist, the clasp gave way. The bra sagged forward, Evelyn's breasts still hidden beneath the loosened fabric, until Lila peeled it away entirely, letting it drop to the floor with a whisper of lace.
Evelyn’s hands went straight to her breasts to cover them, a ploy to toy with the audience a little. Then she took her hands away and positively arched into the exposure, her shoulders rolling back as if inviting the weight of their attention. Lila’s hands slid around Evelyn’s waist from behind, fingers splaying possessively over her stomach while Evelyn tilted her head back against Lila’s shoulder, her lips parting in a silent exhale.
They held the position for a moment, then Evelyn straightened and moved toward the front of the platform. She paused at the edge, hands on her hips, flaunting her bare breasts. Again she arched her back, pushing her breasts forward, before turning away, moving back toward the center of the stage. Lila set off on a move of her own, but the two soon came together again, this time face-to-face.
Since they were the same height, face-to-face for Evelyn and Lila meant literally face-to-face and breast-to-breast as well. Fiona saw this as a good chance to compare their breasts, deciding that Evelyn's breasts were a little bigger, but Lila's a little more pert with bigger nipples. She hoped the two would get in closer, so their lovely breasts would touch, but they didn't. They held their position.
Lila now reached out and ran her hands down Evelyn’s sides, toying with the waistband of her panties and dawdling there, drawing the moment out. The Shimmy Sisters leaned forward in their seats, their murmured approval barely audible to Fiona over her own racing heartbeat. But Lila surprised everyone by suddenly dropping her hands and relinquishing control.
It was now Evelyn who reached out, running her hands down Lila's sides, her touch deliberately slow as she arrived at her panties. Fiona anticipated a tease to mirror the last one, but in fact Evelyn didn't hesitate for long, peeling the panties down in one fluid motion, allowing them to slither to the floor. Lila stepped free with a dancer’s precision, her body a study in controlled exposure, the lamplight gilding the curve of her bare backside.
A moment passed with the two still standing face-to-face. Now Lila reached out again and, without any dawdling this time, hooked her thumbs into the waistband of Evelyn's panties. The room held its breath as she peeled them down, stepping free with a slow, deliberate sway of her hips. Fiona’s pulse stuttered when Evelyn kicked the discarded item of clothing toward her, it landing just shy of her feet - a silent provocation.
Evelyn and Lila now turned to face their audience, standing bare before them. Fiona’s gaze flickered between the two, noting small details, the way that Lila’s hips cocked just slightly to the side, the defiant tilt of Evelyn’s chin. Laura still gripped her thigh like a vice, but it didn't dilute her appreciation of the two very attractive naked women in front of her.
Evelyn and Lila now moved forward, both swaying seductively. They reached the front edge of the stage and stood there, very close to their audience at this point, and happy to display their bodies for them. Then the music slowed, the rhythm easing into something softer, Lila and Evelyn taking that as a cue to gently resume dancing. They circled one another now, several times turning away from the audience and several times turning back again.
Fiona enjoyed the full-frontal nudity, but she also enjoyed seeing the two curvy backsides as Evelyn and Lila twirled around each other. Eventually they separated, spinning away from each other, but then spinning back until they came together again, ending up back-to-back and pressed right up against each other. They held the position for a few moments and then broke again, once more spinning away from each other.
Evelyn’s hand caught Lila’s wrist mid-spin, pulling her back with a sharp tug that sent them chest-to-chest again. This time it was a chest-to-chest that squeezed them close. So close that their breasts pressed against each other. Fiona had hoped to see the two dancers in this position earlier and now she could. Fortunately for her, they hold the position for several moments, heads turned toward the audience.
The music appeared to be reaching a conclusion, with just a lone saxophone still playing. Evelyn and Lila turned their heads to be face-to-face again and melted into a kiss. They held each other tight, hands finding each other's backsides, breasts still pressed together. As the last note sounded, they broke the kiss and turned their heads to the audience again.
For a beat, the room was in silence. Then applause broke out, warm and genuine, the five watching women keen to show their appreciation. After the applause faded, the Shimmy Sisters were quick to offer their professional appraisal of what they'd seen, their enthusiasm for doing so a reflection on how much they had enjoyed the performance.
Fiona listened to the conversation, but barely registered their analysis. The Shimmy Sisters dissected the performance with theatrical flair, how Lila’s wrist flick had echoed Evelyn’s earlier provocation, how the final kiss had teetered between choreography and spontaneity. But Fiona's mind was fixed on the intimacy of what she'd just seen and the thrill of seeing Evelyn and Lila perform together.
She tried to pay attention to what was being said, but couldn't stop picturing that final scene when their breasts were pressed against each other, the way Evelyn’s and Lila's nipples had visibly hardened as they did so, how their hands had grasped each other’s backsides with unmistakable hunger. The image seared itself into Fiona’s mind, replaying in slow motion.
Laura’s grip on Fiona’s thigh finally loosened as Evelyn and Lila pulled silk robes on, their movements languid and self-satisfied. The air in the dressing room still hummed with residual energy, thick enough that Fiona could taste it on her tongue, sharp and electric. Evelyn caught Fiona’s gaze and held it, her lips quirking into a smirk as she tied her robe loosely, leaving the swell of her breasts visible. "Enjoy the show, darling?" she purred, stretching the word like a cat arching its back.
Laura’s fingers flexed against Fiona’s thigh, neither tightening nor releasing entirely, as Evelyn’s question hung between them. Fiona swallowed, acutely aware of the excitement she still felt, the way her pulse still hadn’t steadied, the way her mind was still processing slow-motion replays. “It was... It was incredible,” she admitted, voice lower than she intended.
Evelyn’s smirk deepened, her fingers playing with the loose knot of her robe. "‘Incredible’ is a start," she murmured, stepping closer. "But I’d love a more detailed review. I'd love to know exactly what you liked best." Her gaze flicked to Laura, then back, a silent challenge.
Fiona's throat tightened under Evelyn's gaze, her mind racing with images. Lila’s fingers at Evelyn’s bra clasp, the slow reveal of bare skin, the two of them standing naked right at the front of the stage, the way their bodies had pressed together in that final, breathless moment. She could feel Laura’s stillness beside her, the weight of her silence more unnerving than any command.
Laura’s fingers twitched against Fiona’s thigh, a silent warning, but Evelyn ignored it, her shoe close enough to nudge Fiona’s shoe as she leaned in. "Come on," Evelyn coaxed, her voice dripping with amusement. "Tell me which part made you clench those pretty thighs together." Fiona’s face burned, but before she could stammer a reply, Laura’s hand slid possessively up her inner thigh, fingers pressing just shy of where Fiona ached most.
Laura’s fingers pressed harder, a silent command to hold her tongue, but Evelyn only grinned wider, leaning in until her breath ghosted over Fiona’s ear. “Or maybe,” she whispered, “you’d rather tell me what else we could have done to entertain you. What you'd like to have seen, but didn't.” Fiona’s pulse skyrocketed as she considered her reply, but Laura interjected with a sharp click of her tongue. “Enough,” she said, her voice low but edged with steel. Evelyn withdrew with a theatrical sigh, though her eyes stayed locked on Fiona’s flushed face.
Laura’s grip on Fiona’s wrist tightened as she stood abruptly, pulling her up with her. The sudden movement sent Fiona’s pulse stuttering, part fear, part thrill, as Laura’s voice cut through the thick air. “Thanks for the show, but it's late now and we have to go.” There was no room for argument in her tone, only the sharp finality of a command. Fiona’s knees wobbled as she rose, her gaze darting to Evelyn one last time, catching the dancer’s smirk, the way her fingers still toyed lazily with her robe’s loose tie.
Laura’s grip didn’t relent as they said their goodbyes to the Shimmy Sisters. She guided Fiona toward the door, her strides sharp with purpose. Behind them, Evelyn’s laughter lingered, a husky, knowing sound, as the dressing room’s warmth gave way to the club’s dim hallway. Fiona’s pulse hammered in her throat, her skin still buzzing from the performance, from Evelyn’s nearness, from Laura’s unspoken fury. The air between them crackled, thick enough to choke on.
The hallway outside the dressing room was narrow, its walls vibrating faintly with the distant thrum of the club’s music. Laura didn’t speak, didn’t even look at her, just dragged Fiona forward with a grip that bordered on painful. Fiona stumbled once, her heel catching on the uneven floor, but Laura’s hold didn’t falter. The silence was worse than any reprimand, heavy with the promise of whatever waited for them beyond the club’s back door.
Laura shoved the exit door open with enough force to send it slamming against the brick wall outside. The cold alley air hit Fiona like a slap. Laura finally released her wrist only to spin her around, pinning her against the damp wall with a hand pressed flat against her collarbone. "You need to take a look at yourself," Laura hissed, her breath hot against Fiona’s cheek. "Staring at her like some starstruck groupie."
Fiona’s stomach clenched at the accusation. Then she gasped as Laura’s fingers tightened against her throat, not enough to cut off air, but enough to make her pulse throb under the pressure. The brick wall dug into her back, the chill seeping through her dress as Laura leaned in, her lips brushing Fiona’s ear. "You think I didn’t see how you watched her?" Laura’s voice was a whisper, but venomous. "How your fingers twitched like you wanted to touch?"
Fiona’s breath hitched - she had wanted to touch, by God, she had - especially when Evelyn and Lila had stood naked at the front edge of the stage, which had put them both within reach. But before she could deny it, Laura’s fingers curled against her throat, her grip shifting just enough to tilt her chin up, forcing her to meet her teacher’s darkened gaze. The alley’s single flickering bulb cast jagged shadows across Laura’s face, sharpening the predatory gleam in her eyes.
“You forget yourself,” Laura murmured, her thumb pressing into the hollow of Fiona’s collarbone. “You forget who owns you.” Laura then spun her around to face the wall. Fiona gasped, instinctively putting her hands up to prevent herself from thudding against the brick “You want to be her plaything?” Laura growled.“ You want Evelyn’s hands on you instead of mine?”
“N-no,” Fiona choked out, but Laura’s immediate scoff drowned out her weak denial. Laura then placed both hands on the hem of Fiona's dress, quickly gathering it up. "Don’t do that, it's cold," Fiona protested, as her legs were exposed. But Laura was unrelenting, and kept gathering the dress until it was bunched at her waist.
"Hold your dress there," Laura said. Fiona obeyed, lowering her hands to hold the dress where Laura had placed it. Laura then took hold of Fiona's panties and without any hesitation she pulled them down.
"Oh no, it's cold," Fiona protested again, but Laura wasn't interested in her protests.
Laura's fingers traced the exposed curve of Fiona's backside, her touch colder than the night air. "You looked at Evelyn like she was the teacher tonight," she murmured, giving her a sharp slap that sent her jolting forward against the brick. "Like her approval mattered more than mine." Another slap landed, harder this time, the sound echoing off the alley walls. Fiona bit her lip to stifle a whimper as heat bloomed across her skin.
Laura’s next slap landed with deliberate precision, her fingers lingering just long enough to feel Fiona’s skin quiver under the sting. “Count,” she ordered, her voice slicing through the alley’s damp silence. Fiona’s breath shuddered as she obeyed - “Three” - her grip tightening on her bunched dress. The next strike came before she could steady herself, sharp enough to make her toes curl in her heels. “F-four.”
Laura’s hand cracked against Fiona’s skin again - "Five" - each number punched out between gasps as the sting radiated deeper. The alley’s shadows swallowed their silhouettes, the distant hum of the club a world away. Laura’s palm hovered, savoring the heat rising from Fiona’s flesh before delivering the sixth strike, this one landing just below the last, igniting a fresh wave of trembling. "S-six," Fiona choked, fingers clawing at her bunched dress.
At that moment, the exit door of the club opened and a couple of women came out. Fiona turned her head to look at them, but their eyes flickered toward her only fleetingly, as they walked right by as though nothing out of the ordinary was happening. Perhaps it's normal for young women to stand in this alley with their panties around their ankles, Fiona thought, or perhaps they were just minding their own business.
Laura's fingers dug into Fiona’s hip, yanking her back into position as she delivered the seventh strike, harder, slower, the impact lingering like a brand. "Seven," Fiona gasped, her voice breaking as her knees buckled. Laura caught her by the waist, holding her upright with one hand while the other traced the flushed skin she’d just marked. "You belong to me," Laura murmured, her breath hot against Fiona’s ear. "Every glance, every shiver - mine to command."
Laura’s fingers tightened around Fiona’s waist, nails pressing crescents into the soft skin above her hipbone. “Eight,” she whispered, her lips brushing Fiona’s earlobe before delivering another stinging slap, this one lower, right where thigh met cheek, the sound sharp as a whip crack. Fiona’s knees gave out entirely, her forehead pressing against the brick as she gasped out the number, her voice cracking under the weight of humiliation and arousal.
Laura’s hand smoothed over the heated skin, her touch deceptively gentle now. “Nine,” she murmured, fingers dipping lower, before she delivered the next slap, crisp and precise. Fiona cried out this time, her fingers twisting in the fabric of her dress as she choked out the count. The alley’s cold air did nothing to dull the fire spreading through her, every strike a paradox of pain and pleasure, every gasp torn from her lips feeding the dizzying haze of submission.
Laura now delivered her final blow, her palm landing the hardest this time, as she finished with a flourish. This final slap almost sent Fiona reeling against the wall, her body arching instinctively away from the pain. "T-ten," she managed to mumble, her voice barely above a whisper.
Laura's fingers curled possessively around Fiona's waist, pulling her back from the wall with a force that made her stumble. The damp brick had left smudges on Fiona's bare thighs, the contrast of grime against her reddened skin obscenely vivid. "Look at you," Laura muttered, turning her roughly to face the dim alleyway's lone flickering bulb. The light caught the tears clinging to Fiona's lashes, the uneven rise and fall of her chest.
Laura’s grip on Fiona’s chin tightened, forcing her to meet her gaze under the flickering bulb. “You’re lucky I don’t leave you here,” she murmured, her thumb dragging roughly over Fiona’s bottom lip. “Let Evelyn find you like this, bare-assed and begging.” The thought sent a jolt through Fiona, shame and arousal twisting together until she couldn’t tell which was sharper.
Laura released Fiona’s chin abruptly, letting her stagger back a step. The cold air bit at her exposed skin, her panties still tangled around her ankles. Laura's eyes raked over Fiona’s disheveled form with a mixture of satisfaction and lingering anger. "Pull them up," she ordered, "make yourself look decent." Fiona bent shakily, fingers fumbling, her thighs still trembling from the lingering sting, but she pulled her panties back into place.
"Let's get a taxi," Laura said, her tone clipped. "Walk fast. I don’t have patience for dawdling tonight."
When they arrived at her house, Laura was still intent on not wasting time, immediately ushering Fiona up the stairs and into her bedroom. "Get undressed," she said, her voice very cool. Fiona obeyed, Laura watching for a moment and then starting to undress too.
When they were both naked, Laura closed the distance between them in three strides, her hands finding Fiona's shoulders, pushing her back and down onto the bed. “Still thinking about Evelyn?” she murmured, Fiona immediately shaking her head in reply. “You're such a liar,” Laura said quietly, almost a whisper. "I saw what an impact she made on you tonight."
“No, I'm yours,” Fiona gasped, the word barely audible. “I'm only thinking about you.”
“What was that you said?" Laura drawled. “I can hardly hear you."
Fiona’s knees trembled, her breath coming in shallow bursts as she forced the words out louder. “I'm yours, Laura. I'm only thinking about you.” The admission hung between them, raw and electric, before Laura allowed herself a slight smile, slowly nodding in approval.
"Show me you mean that." She moved closer, until she was standing right alongside the bed, and cupped one of her breasts. "Let's see your mouth on this nipple."
Fiona’s lips parted as she leaned forward, her breath hitching when Laura’s fingers tangled in her hair - not guiding, just claiming. The first lick was tentative, but the sharp tug at her scalp erased any hesitation. She closed her mouth fully around the nipple, swirling her tongue in slow, deliberate circles, just the way she knew from experience that Laura liked.
Laura’s fingers tightened in Fiona’s hair, pulling just enough to make her scalp prickle with sharp pleasure. “Harder,” she commanded, voice low and rough. Fiona obeyed instantly, sucking with renewed intensity, her tongue pressing flat against the stiff peak as Laura arched slightly into her mouth. A quiet hum of approval vibrated through Laura’s chest, and Fiona felt it against her lips, a reward that sent heat pooling low in her belly.
Laura’s grip shifted from Fiona’s hair to the back of her neck, fingers pressing just hard enough to make her pulse jump under the pressure. “Other side,” she murmured, tilting Fiona’s head back with a sharp jerk of her wrist. Fiona obeyed without hesitation, her mouth leaving Laura’s nipple with a soft, wet sound before she leaned forward again, lips parting around the other. This time, Laura didn’t wait for her to find the rhythm. She guided Fiona’s head with deliberate force, her nipple dragging against Fiona’s tongue in slow, controlled strokes. Fiona moaned around her, the vibration earning a quiet hitch in Laura’s breath.
Laura’s grip on Fiona’s neck tightened, guiding her movements with an almost clinical precision. “Slower,” she murmured, her free hand tracing idle patterns down Fiona’s spine. The command was soft, but Fiona obeyed instantly, her tongue flattening against Laura’s nipple in deliberate, languid strokes. The room was silent except for the wet sounds of Fiona’s mouth and Laura’s occasional exhales - sharp, controlled little breaths that betrayed nothing.
Laura’s fingers tangled in Fiona’s hair again, this time as a way of guiding her away from her nipple. She then climbed onto the bed, lying back and looking very relaxed, motioning Fiona to come closer, and parting her own legs as she did so. When Fiona was close enough, she guided her head between those parted legs, making it clear what was required.
Fiona quickly settled into position, Laura’s thighs bracketing her head, her tongue darting out to obey the unspoken command. Laura’s grip in her hair tightened, not pulling, just holding, a silent demand for Fiona to perform up to expectations. Fiona happened to be fully focused anyway and not in need of any further encouragement, her tongue dragging slow, deliberate strokes upward, savoring the resulting low hum of approval that vibrated in Laura's throat.
Fiona gave one final slow stroke upward and then switched to circling Laura's clit, her tongue perfectly steady. She was rewarded when Laura's hum broke into a gasp, her hips lifting slightly off the bed. It was a clear signal for Fiona to continue with what she was doing, and she immediately obliged, keeping the steady rhythm she'd established but pressing harder.
Laura’s thighs tensed around Fiona’s head, the muscles tightening like a vice as Fiona’s tongue worked with relentless precision. A sharp gasp escaped Laura’s lips - half surprise, half surrender - before she arched off the bed entirely, her fingers twisting painfully in Fiona’s hair. “Faster,” she commanded, the word strained, and Fiona obeyed without hesitation, her tongue flicking in quick, urgent strokes that drew another fractured moan from Laura’s throat.
Laura’s hips bucked sharply against Fiona’s mouth, her thighs trembling with the effort of restraint. Fiona could taste the shift, the tension coiling tighter, Laura’s breath coming in short, ragged bursts, and she doubled down, her tongue circling faster now, pressing firmer. A choked sound escaped Laura’s lips, her fingers yanking Fiona’s hair hard enough to make her eyes water, but she didn’t dare pull away. Not when Laura’s thighs were clamping around her ears, not when the low, guttural noises above her signaled how close she was.
Laura’s climax hit like a breaking wave - sudden, shuddering, her hips lifting off the bed in a sharp arch as her fingers twisted brutally in Fiona’s hair. Fiona kept her mouth sealed tight, swallowing every choked sound, her tongue still working in slow, lazy circles even as Laura’s thighs trembled violently around her ears. The aftershocks rolled through Laura in visible pulses, her stomach clenching, her breath ragged, before she finally collapsed back onto the bed, her grip loosening just enough for Fiona to pull back slightly, panting.
Laura’s fingers finally released Fiona’s hair, her hand dropping limply to the mattress. Fiona stayed where she was, her cheek resting against Laura’s inner thigh, the silence in the room broken only by Laura’s gradually steadying breaths. Some moments passed, before Laura finally shifted, propping herself up on one elbow to look down at Fiona.
Laura’s fingers curled under Fiona’s chin, tilting her face upward with deliberate control. The bedside lamp cast uneven shadows across Laura’s expression, something unreadable flickering behind the usual sharpness of her gaze. “You did well,” she murmured, her thumb brushing Fiona’s lower lip. "Very well." The praise sent a jolt through Fiona, warm and dizzying, making the night feel so much better.
Laura’s grip on Fiona’s chin tightened fractionally before releasing her altogether. She rolled onto her side, gesturing to Fiona to come and lie beside her. She accordingly crawled up the bed, her mind humming with anticipation, settling beside Laura, close but not quite touching. Laura’s arm quickly shifted, draping over Fiona’s waist in a possessive curl, her fingers splaying across her stomach with idle pressure.
Laura’s fingers traced slow circles on Fiona’s stomach, her nails occasionally dragging just hard enough to raise goosebumps. "Turn over," she murmured, the command barely louder than the rustle of sheets as Fiona obeyed. The mattress dipped under Laura's weight as she shifted behind her, one knee pressing between Fiona's thighs with deliberate pressure. Fiona's breath hitched, not from the contact, but from the sudden drag of Laura's nails down her spine, sharp enough to leave fleeting pink trails in their wake.
Laura’s breath warmed the nape of Fiona’s neck as she pressed closer, her teeth grazing the sensitive skin there - not biting, just testing. Fiona shivered, her hips pressing back instinctively against Laura’s thigh, earning a low chuckle. “You seem desperate,” Laura murmured, her hand sliding down to grip Fiona’s hipbone, pinning her in place. “Although after everything that’s gone on tonight, I can see why you'd be aching for it.” Her fingers dipped lower, tracing the wet heat between Fiona’s thighs with infuriating lightness. “Isn't that right?”
Laura’s fingertips ghosted over Fiona’s clit, barely making contact - just enough to make her twitch. Fiona whimpered into the pillow, her fingers clawing at the sheets as Laura exhaled another soft laugh against her neck. “You’re desperate all right,” she observed, her voice thick with amusement. “And yet you haven’t begged.” She withdrew her hand entirely, leaving Fiona gasping at the sudden absence. “Would you like to beg?”
Laura's exhale tickled Fiona's ear - slow, deliberate, loaded with silent expectation. Her fingers still hovered around Fiona's clit, the maddening proximity making her thighs twitch. "I asked you a question," Laura murmured, her teeth catching Fiona's earlobe in a sharp nip. "Would you like to beg?"
Fiona's breath stuttered, and her throat tightened, her pulse hammering beneath the skin where Laura's teeth had just been. The question hung between them - not a suggestion, but a test. She swallowed hard, her hips pressing back against Laura’s thigh with involuntary urgency. "Yes," she whispered, the word ragged. "I… I want to."
Laura's exhale was slow, almost amused, and her fingers remained suspended. They were tantalizingly close, so close Fiona could almost taste the relief, but they didn’t move. “Then do it properly,” Laura murmured, her breath hot against Fiona’s ear. “Not some half-whispered surrender. Beg.”
Fiona's lips parted, dry and trembling, before the words finally tumbled out in a rush. "Please." The syllable cracked, raw with need. "Please, Laura, I..." Her hips jerked forward, seeking friction against nothing but air, and Laura's fingers twitched in response, still near her clit but not touching it. Fiona inhaled sharply. "I need you to touch me. Please."
“Louder," she commanded, her voice edged with something darker than amusement now. "I want the neighbors to hear you beg. I want them to hear exactly how badly you need this."
Fiona’s throat burned with the force of her own desperation, the words tearing free before she could stop them. “Please, Laura. I need you to touch me.” The admission ripped through the room, raw and unvarnished, her voice cracking on the last syllable. Laura’s grip in her hair tightened, yanking her head back further, exposing the frantic pulse in her neck.
Laura’s mouth crashed against Fiona’s throat - not a kiss, but a claim - her teeth sinking just hard enough to make Fiona gasp. “Louder,” she demanded against her skin, her free hand finally sliding down to press two fingers against Fiona’s clit. Fiona arched off the bed with a choked cry, her hips jerking into the contact, but Laura held her down with the iron grip in her hair. “Again,” Laura growled, her fingers circling mercilessly. “Let the whole street know who owns you.”
Laura's fingers didn't relent, continuing to circle Fiona's clit, each rotation punctuated by the sharp pinch of her other hand still buried in Fiona's hair. Fiona's next plea came out as a broken wail, her hips bucking uselessly against Laura's unyielding grip. "Please… Laura, I can't..."
Laura’s fingers abruptly stilled, the sudden absence of pressure making Fiona whimper into the mattress. “You can’t what?” Laura purred, dragging her nails down Fiona’s spine, slow enough to make her shiver.
Fiona's muscles locked - her spine arched, her fingers clawing at the sheets - as Laura's nails scraped lower, tracing the dip of her tailbone. The words stuck in her throat, tangled between pride and surrender, but Laura's fingers suddenly pressed hard against her clit again, forcing a gasp from her lungs. "I can't… wait any longer," she choked out, hips jerking forward into Laura's hand. "I need you to touch me… Please."
Laura’s fingers stilled again, before she dragged her nails up Fiona’s inner thigh, slow and deliberate. “You’re forgetting something,” she murmured, her breath hot against Fiona’s shoulder blade. “Who do you belong to?” Her fingertips grazed Fiona’s clit again, feather-light, just enough to make her hips jerk. “Say it properly.”
Fiona's breath hitched as Laura's fingers began to trace maddening circles just above her clit - close enough to tease, not close enough to relieve. The words burned in her throat, tasting like surrender and something sweeter. "I’m yours," she gasped, arching into nothing. "All yours, Laura.”
Laura’s fingers finally moved into meaningful action - not in mercy, but in conquest - pressing into Fiona with a slow, deliberate curl that wrenched a ragged cry from her throat. The stretch burned, just shy of pain, and Fiona’s hips jerked forward instinctively, seeking more, but Laura’s free hand clamped down on her hipbone, pinning her in place. “No,” she murmured, her lips brushing Fiona’s ear. “You get what I give you. And you only get it when I give it.”
Laura’s fingers continued to work inside Fiona, now establishing a rhythm. Fiona’s thighs trembled, her body caught between the desperate urge to thrust forward and the punishing grip pinning her hipbone to the mattress. “You’re clenching around me,” Laura observed, her voice dark with satisfaction. “Like you’re trying to keep me inside.” She punctuated the remark with a sharp twist of her fingers, drawing a strangled moan from Fiona’s throat. “You’re so greedy.”
Laura’s fingers withdrew abruptly, leaving Fiona gasping at the sudden emptiness. The drag of Laura’s nails down Fiona’s inner thigh was slow, deliberate - a taunt masquerading as a caress. “Turn over,” Laura commanded, and Fiona obeyed without hesitation, rolling onto her back, her chest rising and falling rapidly under Laura’s assessing gaze.
Fiona’s pulse jumped under Laura's fingertips as they descended on her breasts, flicking over them several times. Laura's thumbs then brushed Fiona's nipples - once, twice - before she rolled them firmly, squeezing them between finger and thumb, wrenching a lengthy gasp from Fiona's throat.
Laura’s fingers abandoned Fiona’s nipples abruptly, leaving them stiff and aching as she dragged her nails down Fiona’s ribs, slow, calculated scrapes that made Fiona’s breath hitch. The sharp sting bloomed into warmth, and Fiona’s hips lifted, seeking contact, but Laura’s knee pressed down between her thighs, denying her. “Still so impatient,” Laura murmured, her lips brushing Fiona’s ear. “You’d think you’d know better by now.” Her teeth caught Fiona’s earlobe, biting just hard enough to make her whimper. “But you don’t, do you?”
Laura’s free hand finally slid lower, fingertips dragging through Fiona’s wetness with deliberate, torturous lightness, then tracing Fiona’s clit with the same infuriating lightness - just a ghost of contact, just enough to make Fiona’s hips jerk forward.
Laura’s fingers descended without warning - not the teasing strokes Fiona expected, but the blunt press of two fingers sinking deep into her, curling instantly against that spot that made her vision blur. Fiona gasped, her back arching off the mattress, but Laura’s grip on her wrists tightened, holding her down as her fingers worked Fiona with ruthless efficiency. She twisted her fingers sharply, wrenching a choked cry from Fiona’s throat.
Laura's thumb now found Fiona's clit and pressed down with just enough pressure to make Fiona cry out again. "You're close," Laura observed, but abruptly withdrew her hand, before suddenly flipping her onto her stomach with a single rough tug.
The sudden shift left Fiona gasping into the sheets, her fingers twisting in the fabric as Laura traced a single fingertip down the length of her spine - slow, deliberate, a promise and a threat coiled into one. “You’re mine,” Laura murmured, her breath hot against Fiona’s lower back. “Every inch of you.” Her fingertip circled Fiona’s entrance, gathering slickness before pressing in just enough to make Fiona whimper. “And I decide when you come.”
Laura’s fingers tangled in Fiona’s hair, yanking her head back just enough to expose the frantic flutter of her pulse. The sharp sting made Fiona gasp, but the sound dissolved into a moan as Laura’s other hand slid between her thighs. No teasing this time, just the blunt press of three fingers sinking deep. Fiona’s elbows buckled, her face pressing into the mattress as Laura’s palm ground against her clit with each thrust. "You’re going to come," Laura whispered, her lips brushing Fiona’s ear, "and you’re going to thank me for it."
Laura’s fingers twisted inside Fiona, establishing a steady rhythm again, her thumb circling her clit with enough pressure to make her vision blur at the edges. Fiona’s body began to convulse toward release, her thighs quivering violently, her breath coming in ragged bursts against the mattress, her body strung tight like a wire seconds from snapping.
Fiona’s back arched violently, her hips lifting off the mattress, as she teetered over the edge and her climax crashed over her, a strangled cry tearing from her throat. She now lay slack, shuddering uncontrollably, the aftershocks rippling through her body. Laura smoothed a hand down the trembling curve of her spine, but Fiona didn’t react, feeling spent now, her cheek still pressed against the crumpled sheets, her breathing still ragged.
“Remember what I said,” Laura prompted, giving Fiona a reminder of ownership. “You’re going to thank me for that.”
Fiona felt the weight of Laura’s expectant silence pressing down on her, sharper than any touch, but it had been a long night and she had very little left to give now. She forced her voice to work, the words barely audible. "Thank you."
Laura leaned down, her breath scorching against Fiona’s ear. “You need to do better than that.” The demand was a razor’s edge, slicing through the haze of Fiona’s exhaustion.
Fiona lifted her head a little, making it easier to speak. "Thank you, Ms. Middleton," she murmured, the words more deliberate this time. “Thank you for touching me. For… For owning me."
Laura nodded in approval. “Good girl,” she drawled, her apparent satisfaction sending a shiver through Fiona’s spent body, as she instinctively relished the praise. Laura reached out and smoothed a hand down her back again.
Fiona’s breathing had steadied now and she slowly sat up. “I’d better get home,” she said. “I’ll see you on Tuesday for my next lesson.”
"I hope you've been practicing the Satie piece," said Laura, quickly switching to teacher mode. “Don’t forget that I’m expecting a perfect rendition of Je Te Veux.”
Fiona nodded. “Yes, every day,” she said. "I don't know if I can get it perfect, but I'm trying."
"It's well within your grasp," Laura replied.
"If I play it perfectly, will I be rewarded?"
Laura’s lips curled into a slow, knowing smile as she reached out, tucking a loose strand of hair behind Fiona’s ear. “And what reward are you seeking exactly?”
“To be owned by you in public again.”
Laura still bore the knowing smile. “Isn’t that just another way of saying you want to go to The Lantern again? To see Evelyn again?”
“To be together in public’s important to me. I don’t want to just see you in the bedroom.”
“That’s all very well, but public ownership requires public discipline. I don't think you have that.”
“I’m learning.”
Laura took her time in replying. “Play perfectly on Tuesday and we’ll go to The Lantern. But when we’re there, I expect you to show me how much discipline you’ve learned.”
Fiona nodded. “I’ll try to be perfect there too.”
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