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My editor Dennis is a loyal friend, trusted advisor, dedicated proofreader and editor. We met way back in 2015, or somewhere around Part 25 of ALICIA AND THE BIKINI STORE. A fair but critical reader and fan, we became friends, and somewhere in late 2017, early 2018, he began ‘advance reading’ my stories, and then took on editing. During that time, he has had TWO chief complaints (that I can recall). He likes my stepmom stories and he likes my harem stories, but his consistent complaint is “Another stepmom story?” and/or “Another harem story?” 99 percent of what has been posted since late 2017 or early 2018 has been proofread and edited by Dennis before it goes up exclusively on ES. Sometimes I miss something, sometimes he does, but my writing and his editing has improved over time.

What is my point?

This non harem, no stepmom story is dedicated to and for Dennis.

If you are a regular reader, you will realize by the end of this part, that this is not my carbon copy blueprint. Some jokes, conversations, time worn cliches, and sex descriptions may be borrowed or repeated, but this is a fresh, original story. The disclaimer and ‘shout out’ will be placed at the end of the story. NO PEEKING, because it could spoil the surprise. I have the utmost respect for women, relationships, rules, laws and people, this is just an erotic story.

I hope you enjoy this, something definitely different.

Thank you for reading, let me know what you think.

Any people, places, names, products or events mentioned are done so without permission or endorsement, this is a work of fiction. Names have been randomly generated then chosen to suit the characters.

My name is Jeff, I am 18 years old, stand 5’ 11” with short brown hair, light brown eyes, and an athletic frame. I live with my mom in Tampa, she is 37 and divorced from my dad who is remarried and lives in Virginia. I have had a good life, graduated high school, and am enjoying the Summer before I start Community College. My mom owns a local store that you have to experience to describe. She calls it a variety store, and that sort of suits it, because she sells a bit of everything. If she needs help, or I’m bored, I go there and run the register, stock shelves, check in vendors, or just hang out. No pressure and according to mom, that’s the way she wants it. She asks for help if she needs it, but after five years, the store almost runs itself.

Now that everyone is happy, time for the cliches I’m not happy about.

At 18, I’m still a virgin.

That may not seem like an issue to you, but my last girlfriend broke up with me when she figured it out and the hurtful thing was she said she didn’t want the pressure of being my first. I have dated two girls since, the first one did the same thing just two weeks in, once the making out got more constant. The second, most recent girl, I told on our second date.

We didn’t have a third date.

Not even a text or phone call.

So that’s one cliche.

Here comes the second one, I hope you’re ready.

Our next door neighbor, separated by a driveway, is a single mom named Danielle. A true MILF, she has a 10 year old daughter named Kelly, who splits time with Danielle and her ex-husband Brian. Danielle is 31 years old, stands 5’ 10” with long, brown hair, beautiful light blue eyes, an absolute fit, perfect body, and a stunning smile. Danielle is nice, sweet, kind, amazing, beautiful, hotter than the Summer Sun, and the object of both my dreams and fantasies. I can’t lie and say she doesn’t notice me, because the truth is, a couple of weeks ago we kissed.

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