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Careful What You're Dreaming 2

Shirley narrator Diana salesgirl of the picture Beth Diana's femme roommate Alice Diana's butch roommate

This is the second part of a story submitted in a contest. I assumed that the judges would respond more to the erotic rather than the pornographic and perhaps the assumption was correct as I ended up with a fourth place finish. However a couple of judges who leaned the other way subtracted heavily because the story was not "hot" enough. This part is about as down and dirty as I am capable of writing just to respond to the opinions of the few. Also I have received an inordinate amount of demands for a continuation and a denouement of the "cliffhanger" situation in which I ended the first story, ended as much in consideration for the story length requirements as a manipulative plot device.

My hope that the girls were joking was a futile hope indeed. The air within their apartment was fraught with tension as I slowly unbuttoned my top and pulled the lapels of my top down over my shoulders. My breasts were tightly bound in a heavily reinforced bra and I felt a wave of fear as I looked at the three faces staring at me, seeming to grow more impatient as I struggled to take off my top. My fingers were not working properly.

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