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understatement when it came to describing Andrea. What started as her perched on the edge of the table ended with us both on top of it. Even as I crested and exploded deep inside Andrea's fit body, she gripped me and moaned through a vibrating orgasm as her pussy clenched and squeezed my spurting cock.

Moments after, in our third shower together, Andrea said "There's a fine line between being aggressive and crossing a line." I nodded and said "I wouldn't." Andrea touched my face and said "I believe you." Then she smiled and said "Babe, if you beat mom to the punch, flirt with her like you do me, crowd her, touch her, grab her, she will beg you to fuck her."

In any other universe, this conversation would be surreal to say the least.

We got dressed, but then Andrea stood there with her hands on her hips staring at me. Finally she said "I promise to only ask this once. Will you trust me?" I said "Your concern was that your mom would seduce me, steal me, and you would lose me. Right?" Andrea nodded and I said "Well mine is finding someone all around amazing and perfect like you, having the greatest sex of my life, and then something takes it all away from me." Andrea's eyes were pure fire as she stared at me breathing deeply.

I asked "We're about to have sex, huh?"

Her answer was to unbutton, unzip, and work her white jeans down.

A half hour later, we were dressed again and this time I had on loose shorts, no underwear, a tight t-shirt that was too small for me, and I just shook my head. Andrea said "Two things and you have to forget your nice guy morals if we're going to do this." I nodded and said "Yes and okay, but what's with the loose shorts and no underwear?" Andrea flirted "What a shame it would be if you were hard and somehow your shorts slipped off or fell down." I inhaled as Andrea said "Okay, so the two things and if this works out, we come back here and I will fuck you all night long." I grinned and Andrea clucked "I mean, I'm going to anyways, but think of it like incentive."

I just gasped "Jesus."

At the front door while crowding me, flirting, teasing and rubbing my cock through the shorts, Andrea said "So the two things? One, don't worry about what you say or do. I won't get jealous or bent. Your only goal is to seduce mom, which leads to two, whatever it takes, go after her. Like you do me, flirt, flirt and flirt some more. Put your hands on her, go after her and keep her off balance and excited until something happens." I was rock hard in my shorts and said "Keep rubbing me and I will fuck you Andi." She stared into my eyes and asked "What would you be willing to do to keep fucking me? What was your promise?" I inhaled and said "Anything." Gripping my iron hard shaft through my shorts, Andrea purred "Do this for us and I will give myself to you. I will sleep in your bed, fuck you at will. Hell. I'll cook, clean your house and be the wife you'll wish you had." I don't know why, but I saw red, put my hand on Andrea's neck, squeezed, then said "I'm going to fuck you into next week."

Now her eyes were filled with electricity but when Andrea moved her hands up to grasp mine around her neck, she wasn't trying to loosen my grip, she was trying to get me to squeeze more. I let go of Andrea's throat, filled my hands with her long hair, pulled and we kissed feverishly. I have no doubt that we were about to fuck, maybe right there at the front door, but somehow Andrea calmed me down and begged "Let's go. Right now while you're riled up. Whatever it takes babe, seduce her before she seduces you."

Next thing I knew, while way beyond rock hard, we were in Andrea's house, and I was introduced to Katherine who asked me to call her Kathy. 38 years young, Kathy was 5' 10", had long blonde hair, blue eyes, and was an 18 year older version of Andrea including the fit, fuck me body. I know because even past my lust-crazed fog I realized Kathy was barely wearing a micro skirt that didn't hide her light blue panties and her lacy sheer white tank top showed a lot of her matching bra.

Then the inevitable happened much, much sooner than I expected when Andrea said "Mom, pay attention to Scott while I go get some things to spend the night with him." Kathy was zeroed in on the erection tenting and bulging my shorts, Andrea vanished, so I thought of the dumbest porn seduction I could recall. I gasped "It aches so much Kathy. I don't know what to do." She bit ‘full bite' as she crowded me while panting "What hurts baby? What can I do?" I glanced around and Kathy had to have read my mind as she pushed and led me into a small guest room, closed the door, locked it, then crowded me again, asking "Where does it hurt baby?"

In 299 of 300 scenarios, I would never do what I did, but Andrea couldn't have been clearer that I not only had immunity, but the reward would be priceless. So I did the unthinkable and pulled at my shorts until my hard dick sprang free and stood straight up angry and pulsing. Kathy gasped as I crowded closer to her and panted "Your skirt." Kathy's eyes were glazed with arousal, her hand found my shaft and gripped it, and I repeated "Your skirt." Kathy was so aroused I was sure I could seduce her and then some. I pushed the last of my morals into a dark recess of my brain and pulled at Kathy's skirt until she panted "I should take it off." Even as it drifted down her smooth, tanned legs and pooled at her feet, I boldly touched Kathy all around her panty line as she was now squeezing and slowly rubbing my shaft. I crowded closer, our bodies were pressed together, and even as Kathy let go of my raging cock to hold me, I felt something warm and moist against my shaft.

I knew what I had to do and as strange as it sounds, I had permission to do it.

To be honest, I had instructions to do it.

So I did it.

A fantasy I didn't even know I had came true as I reached down, moved Kathy's panties aside, then pushed my hard cock deep inside my girlfriend's mother. A true MILF, Kathy was hotter than HELL itself and her pussy was not only very wet, but very tight. I did everything Andrea asked and suggested as the seduction was brisk and frantic, and so was the sex. I put my hands on Kathy's throat, and even while fucking hard and fast, her eyes lit up as she stared into mine. And then I squeezed enough to cause her to scream through a sudden, intense orgasm. I let go of her neck to hold her waist as we continued our high speed fuck standing up, but when Kathy seemed to have control of her senses, she mimicked her daughter by grabbing my wrists and moving them back up to her throat.

It took me a moment to think, realize what she did and what she wanted, then I squeezed. Kathy went wild and practically fucked me, and then with no warning at all, I exploded into Kathy's volcanic pussy and pumped until I had nothing left, not even energy.

It went against my morals, but hoping it worked like Andrea suggested, I pulled out of Kathy, picked her skirt up, used it to wipe off my cock, and just left the guest room. I pulled my shorts up and met Andrea in the kitchen, she handed me a purple Gatorade, then gasped "Already? Fucking A babe." I kissed Andrea's lips then whispered "Now I need you to trust me." She nodded several times, her hair was in a ponytail now, and it danced. Andrea shifted to hold me and was EXTRA attentive when her mother came out of the guest room SERIOUSLY blushing, half naked and holding her rumpled, cum soaked skirt. She swallowed as she glanced at us, then dashed out of sight.

Andrea and I were grinning at each other when I whispered "Just to make my point, I picked up her skirt and used it to wipe off." Andrea gasped "BABE" and we kissed furiously for several minutes until she pushed me away and panted "Let's go. After you take a shower, we're gonna fuck non stop." I put my hand on the back of Andrea's neck and she lit up like a Christmas tree while trying to kiss me. I gasped "Andi, calm down" but she was panting "I can't. It drives me insane when you put your hands on me."

We were staring at each other when Kathy coughed and stood there in blue leggings, a NO DOUBT t-shirt, and her hair was damp. I said "Thank you for the talk. It helped." Kathy gasped as Andrea pushed her buttons by saying "I really hope you and Scott can get along mom." Kathy gasped again, looked nervous and worried, as if she might get caught doing something. I moved closer, her eyes filled with me as she stared at me nervously, and I said "It really is nice to meet you. I hope we can be friends." Kathy gasped a third time, was blushing, and her stiff nipples pressing against her t-shirt told the story.

Then unexpectedly, Andrea accidentally pushed the last button when she said "So mom, I'm thinking maybe you can have the master because if things work out, I'll be staying with Scott." Kathy was blinking rapidly and then the hammer dropped when Andrea said "Hey, I know. Why don't we see if Scott can help you in the bedroom when he's not busy." Kathy gasped, stared a hole through me as she moved to get herself a gatorade, drank it while eying me, then swallowed and quietly said "Okay." Andrea picked up a backpack, handed it to me, picked up an overstuffed shoulder bag, then said "I'll probably do my content over here while Scott is working, but if you need us, we're right next door." Andrea smiled at me, I smiled back, then glanced at the door. She took the hint, winked, then left.

Kathy was staring at me as I set the backpack down and said "You are an amazing woman, I see where Andi gets her qualities." Kathy tried three times before she gasped "Thank you" and then I crowded her and said "I'll be over tomorrow so we can talk again." Kathy inhaled, her eyes were locked onto me, and she nervously panted "Okay." I picked up the backpack, smiled at her, then said "Thank you." She blinked rapidly, gasped "You're welcome" and then I left.

Back at home, Andrea was already putting things away, hers and mine, and I smiled. I grabbed her, she moaned as she spun in my grasp to kiss me furiously, and I asked "You were serious?" Andrea panted "Very. It riles me when you put your hands on me. If you grab, touch or play with me roughly Scott, you will get laid." I grinned but Andrea said "Go take a shower then I will fuck you. It's not a lot to ask."

I was in the bathroom naked and adjusting the water when Andrea appeared blushing. I smiled and she asked "What? It's your fault for making me so horny." I asked "Playing rough really excites you?" She nodded as she stripped and I asked "What about the shower?" Andrea smiled "If you rinse off, we can fuck. You flipped my switch so now we have to fuck." I asked "Andi? Where exactly is your switch? So I know?" She poured herself against me and purred "Lets just say it's my entire body, no matter where you touch it." Pulling her with me, I stepped into the shower, rinsed off, especially my cock, then picked Andrea up. As she leapt up to straddle my body facing me and began kissing me everywhere, I shut off the shower and took her to the bedroom. She wasn't exaggerating or joking, she was so excited she was soaked as I moved down to lick her sopping pussy. She tasted like vanilla and wood smoke as I nibbled her nub and lips while putting the work in.

Andrea was thrashing beneath me, her legs were practically wrapped around my head, and she raked her nails through my hair. When her orgasm hit, it was intense and passionate. I kept at her until she pulled at me and guided me to enter her. I slid slowly inside Andrea for the... was it the fifth time that day? The sixth? I gasped "It's official, you are not only my best lover, but my favorite." Andrea's eyes were filled with lightning as she pulled at me and panted "Fuck me." I started stroking slow and deep but Andrea gripped my sides, used enough of her nails to make a point, and growled "I said fuck me."

So I did.

I stroked fast, hard and deep into Andrea as she held me and moved her hips in motion with me. We were really going at it when Andrea stared at me with crazy eyes and said "You fucked my mom Scott." Those crazy eyes chilled me to my bone and I found a new gear as I did what Andrea asked and fucked her into next week. We fucked each other in a frenzy until Andrea was literally shaking, had her eyes closed, and wrapped her legs up around me. Then her body trembled, her eyes shot open, and she screamed "OH MY GOD YES" and had a massive orgasm. I lost it and came, nothing spectacular, but I came and kept going until we lay there quiet, happy and breathless. Andrea was petting me and asked "Did it work? Did my crazy eyes work?" I said "Christ Andi, you chilled me to my bones." Andrea laughed "I guess you better never hurt me babe. I'll give you crazy eyes." We laughed, kissed, then took a shower. Our fourth? Fifth? Sixth?

In the shower we discussed what happened with her mom.

Why did it seem to excite Andrea?

In just thin white panties and a micro, pointless tank top, Andrea made us a snack while I set up my office. After a bit I went out for a kiss and said "I'm actually off until Monday if you want to do something tomorrow or Saturday, except during SMACKDOWN." Andrea was setting stuff on the table and I laughed, "That's not a snack babe, that's a meal." She said "I told you several times we were going to fuck all night. You need your strength to keep up with me babe." I smiled and she smiled back then said "I noticed you didn't mention Sunday. Football I'm guessing?" I said "Depends on which games, but always when BALTIMORE plays." Andrea held me and asked "Church then?" I nodded and said "No matter what. Mom expects it and that includes you now."

We ate and then Andrea stood at the edge of the living room and asked "At risk of invoking a ‘too soon' conversation, if things work out, will this be your house or ours?" I asked "So you're not worried about your mom?" Andrea sighed, leaned against the wall, bit her lip, then asked "How far are you willing to take things?" I stared at Andrea and knew in my soul she was one of a kind. So far all aces and no red flags. I sighed then said "All the way to the altar." Andrea's eyes lit up and she smiled "That's great babe, you have my vote, but I was talking about things with mom." I sat on the couch, Andrea came to sit on my lap, then wiggled around to lay snuggled against me. She sighed and said "I'm happy" and it filled me with joy because I was too.

I exhaled then asked "How far should we take things? Right now, if I'm right, she's conflicted between feeling like I took her and wondering if she wants more." Andrea said "I think one or two more times should do it. We have to be sure we're in charge, not mom." I blinked, trying to fathom what was being asked and the gravity of it when Andrea spun and moved to face me, straddling my lap, and her pussy was warm through her thin panties. I grinned and said "You are a one of a kind high performance sex machine." Andrea smiled a sultry smile, kissed me, then said "That is the perfect compliment, thank you." I said "Thank you for mesmerizing me in your bikini and dazzling me with your perfection." Andrea stared at me for a moment then asked "You really see me like that?" I reached between us to touch Andrea's warm lips through her panties. She practically leapt off me, stripped her tank top off, whisked her panties down, then purred "Play with me like a toy."

Just like she said, we fucked all night long.

The next morning I awoke to Andrea's warm, naked body atop mine. I was inside her. My cock was hard, throbbing, and inside her tight, wet pussy. As much as we've fucked, she shouldn't be tight, but like I said and think, she was created for sex. We made love, shared bliss, then she slipped off me with a sigh and snuggled against me to be held. If perfection existed in a female body, it had to be Andrea. We awoke again at 8:34am when Andrea got out of bed to pee, left the bedroom naked and rumpled, came back with a bottle of water and yawned "Sex or more sleep?" I moved the sheet aside to show her I was hard and she laughed "Yay."

At 10:57 we awoke tangled like a pretzel and I laughed "It's good to know I'm loved." Andrea sighed "Suck it. I'm a snuggler, cuddler and like to fuck. Stop complaining." We made out, made love, took a shower, then standing in the bedroom naked brushing her long blonde hair, Andrea laughed "This bedding put in the work. Do you have another set?" I laughed "In one of the boxes somewhere." Andrea looked around then sighed "Or we could go shopping. I'm thinking of purples and pinks for the bedroom." I smiled and she asked "No argument or clever wit?" I said "If I get to sleep with you, I could care less what the colors are or how you arrange things." Andrea smiled "Noted for discussion later. Next question, if we do this fully all in, will I disturb you being here?" I said "I do have to work, but my days aren't 40 hour, punch a clock. If I have all the data and info I need, I can actually complete my stuff in about 5 or 6 hours."

Andrea smiled at me and said "Usually I work out, go for a run, shoot stuff for ONLY FANS, work on my website and binge my shows. In no particular order." I smiled and said "You already know I pay plenty of attention to you and willingly. All I ask is that we agree on some type of word, phrase or code so you know when to turn off, or at least pause that high performance sex machine." Andrea grinned "So don't come bother you when I'm horny?" I grinned back and said "Andi, please do."

We kissed, both of us still naked, and of course kissing turned into sex.

I've lost count on how many times we've had sex and don't even get me started that Andrea and I just met yesterday. With the chemistry and emotions between us, it feels like four months. Finally spent (I hope) and happy, we took another shower, got dressed, had lunch, and Andrea said "I'm going to go shopping for groceries and stuff for around here. Can we just get the eventual squabble about money and who pays for things out of the way right now?" I asked "What do you mean? I make good money and..." Andrea held her hand up as if to silence me and I smiled. She winked at me and said "So many things I love but I really like that we get each other." I asked "You love that you like that?" Andrea narrowed her eyes and asked "Of all possible things, you correct me for that?" I shrugged and said "If I cross a line or offend you, please tell me. Since you want to get the non-existent money argument into the open, I wish to not discuss that we just met yesterday."

Andrea blinked twice, three times, muttered "Ouch", then asked "Was that bothering you?" I said "The only thing that bothers me is I cannot figure out how they perfected your ‘AI'. Perfect is not a strong enough word to describe you and all of your great qualities." Andrea was wired, I could see it in her eyes and body language, so I asked "Before you fuck me, can we finish the conversation?" Andrea nodded, showed me her phone, which had a bank account app loaded, and I whistled as I asked "For real?" She said "That's just my spending account. I have an investment account, two savings accounts and a just in case account." I said "Andrea, feel free to buy whatever you want, whenever you want. I'm just with you for your looks and body." She grinned and said "That works, I'm mostly interested in your looks and how you can almost quench my sex drive."

Almost?

We kissed warmly, then she asked "Do you really think it all happened fast?" I asked "Do you think I want your money?" Andrea blushed and purred "No, but I think you were honest that you like to fuck me." I unzipped my pants, pushed them and my underwear down, Andrea hiked her skirt, stepped closer and then I was inside her. As I slid slowly into her tight wet pussy I gasped "No panties? You're so naughty." She panted "Until my mom moved in, I was naked half the time. I'm proud of my body." I moaned as we kissed furiously while I fucked Andrea hard and fast.

20 minutes later, Andrea left for the store.

This time I convinced her to wear underwear.

I was in my office setting things up when I glanced over and saw Kathy staring at me from whatever room she was in. Her eyes were locked on me like a hunter and that's when my morals vanished and another bad idea came to me. I went into my bedroom, stripped, put on loose shorts like the ones I wore yesterday, no shirt this time, then searched through three boxes until I found the tube of arousal gel I was looking for. My ex Jill loved to play sex games in and out of the bedroom, and when we came across the arousal gel, we used to fuck for an hour at a time. At least! We broke up when she started sleeping with the guy at the adult store where we bought it, but I held onto the gel just in case.

I had nothing but the loose shorts and socks on, texted Andrea "Round 2" and she called immediately. Breathless she panted "Babe." I asked "Are you mad?" Andrea gasped "Fuck no. The way I see it, if you mess with mom a few more times, she won't know what to do or think, and her seducing or stealing you will be the least of our worries." I blinked and thought ‘wow' even as Andrea continued "Besides, if you fuck her like you do me, she won't have any needs to worry about."

In a sick way, it made sense.

Andrea panted "Well that does it. Now I'm going to call your sister and see if I can seduce Jeff. Bye." She hung up and it hit me. She said ‘seduce'. Did that mean tease him and blow his mind, or did it mean fuck him? I forced back dark, jealous thoughts, especially since I was about to go have sex with Andrea's mother, dark seduction or not.

If you think doing all of this was fun and games, it's not.

Morals suck.

I exhaled, inhaled, exhaled, focused on sexy, naughty thoughts, and I was getting hard as I knocked on Kathy's door and let myself in. Kathy was standing there in the kitchen basically naked with just skimpy light pink lingerie on. Even as she panted "Scott" and stared at me with a mix of fear and lust, it registered in my brain that at almost noon, Andrea's fit, beautiful mother was going around the house basically naked. With my cock visibly bulging the shorts I went right up to Kathy, she stared at me anxiously, and I boldly touched her right breast which was barely in the bra cup. She blushed, inhaled, stared at me nervously, then I said "I found this lotion that should help you relax. You seemed so stressed last night." Kathy gasped even as I uncapped it, squeezed some on my fingers, then rubbed it all around the back of Kathy's neck.

Jill and I found out with extensive use, this was our second tube, that the gel aroused her almost instantly, while getting it on my fingers and then my body by contact when we had sex, seemed to prolong my arousal. Combined, sex, with the gel involved, had made things 10 times hotter at least.

Evan as I rubbed it on the back of Kathy's neck, her eyes widened, she inhaled, then panted "Oh God..." Her eyes were molten lava and she was wired with excitement as I squeezed a second glob onto my fingers and applied it to her chest and front. Kathy moaned as she grabbed me, kissed me feverishly, and pulled at my shorts. Yesterday she had been anxious, nervous, startled and timid. With the gel she was wild and wanted to fuck.

We never made it to the bedroom.

My shorts were on the floor along with the tube of arousal gel by the time Kathy's sexy lingerie pooled there. We fell onto the couch and I was deep inside Andrea's MILF mom as we went at it. I fucked Kathy fast, hard and deep, and she made more noise that I could have ever imagined. I was really going at her when between pants and moans Kathy gasped "Why are you doing this to me?" I didn't think or hesitate when I gasped "Because you want me to." A few strokes later she panted "Oh God", gripped me, and then had a couch shaking, body contorting orgasm that caused her pussy to clamp and clench around my cock. I was dizzy, couldn't think, then exploded deep inside Kathy who held me as I thrust and pumped into her until I was finished.

The man, the romantic, the human inside me wanted to hold Kathy, kiss her, show affection after sex. Andrea's voice inside my head had other ideas as I pulled out of her mother, stroked and squeezed the last drips and drizzle of my cum onto her body, then just ignored her as I picked up my shorts and the tube of arousal gel. I put my shorts back on and said "Kathy." She gasped as she sat up to peek nervously at me over the couch. It was cute if I'm honest. She blinked but stared at me intently as I said "From now on I want you to wear as little as possible. If you don't have short, skimpy, slutty outfits, buy them. I want my sex toy ready at all times." Kathy gasped "Sex toy?" I said "You heard me", then just left the house without a word or even looking back.

My blood was boiling and my pulse was pounding. I have never imagined treating a woman like that, like a worthless sex object. It felt both wrong and exhilarating. I went inside and took a long hot shower for two reasons. To wash up out of consideration for Andrea, and to clear my head. Once I was dressed, I puttered around the house, eventually making progress setting up my office. I could take the weekend as part of paid time off for moving, but, in a perfect world, I needed to resume working on Monday. Today was Friday so I had three days to spend time with Andrea and trust me, I wanted to. I was about to call her and see what she was doing when again I glanced out a window and saw Kathy was standing there staring at me.

Eyes locked on me and watching my every move.

And this time she was naked.

I was feeling bold and horny, so I went to the bedroom, undressed, slipped what were beginning to feel like ‘sex with Kathy' shorts on, then went next door. Kathy stood there naked and blushing as I said "I forgot to tell you something when we talked earlier." Kathy inhaled, blushed redder, but stared at me as if waiting. I walked past her and got lucky with the first guess, finding her bedroom. I stripped my shorts down and Kathy blinked twice before getting onto the bed, settling back against the pillows, and parting her legs. All while seriously blushing. As I moved into position between Kathy's long legs, she watched me nervously. It was just before I pushed into her wet pussy that I said "What I forgot to tell you was that sluts need to be fucked." Kathy gasped, then gasped again as I pushed into her tight pussy. She was wet, snug, and hot as I began to fuck her fast and hard.

That was when more bad porn filled my brain.

As I fucked my girlfriend's mother, with permission, I growled at her "Say it. Say that you're a slut." Kathy shook her head, her eyes were defiant, and she held my sides as I drove into her. I said "Say it Kathy. Tell me you're a slut and that you need to be fucked." She shook her head again, now real defiance burned in her eyes, and for whatever reason I felt challenged. I moved my hands up to Kathy's neck, and as I began to squeeze, her eyes changed from defiance to lust.

SHEER LUST!

It took some effort and concentration to choke Kathy and fuck her, but what surprised me was something about being dominated seemed to arouse and excite Kathy, as well as Andrea.

Who knew?

I stroked deep, hard and fast into Kathy until I realized she was gasping and pulling at my hands around her neck. Just as I released my grip, Kathy sucked in air and had a massive, loud orgasm that shook us and the bed, maybe the house. Even as Kathy thrashed and screamed "OH MY FUCKING GOD YES" I gritted my teeth, closed my eyes, then let go and came in a blinding climax that curled my toes. I pumped and thrust to make sure Kathy took all my cum and then just slumped off her. Seriously spent, I crawled off the bed, and picked up my shorts with every intention of going home and taking a nap.

Behind me Kathy said "Scott."

I exhaled, turned, and she lay there spread legged, hair a mess, leaking our combined juices, and repeated "Scott." I exhaled again, then said "Kathy." She visibly shuddered, stared at me nervously, her perfect body moving as she breathed deeply and shocked me to my very core when she said "You were right."

I blinked, stared and waited.

Kathy exhaled then said "I am a slut and I need to be fucked."

... to be continued.

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