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From the ashes of SCENARIOS comes HOT MESS, the story I have always wanted to write.

For years I have been asked to write a ‘slutty woman' story, but went off track every time with romance, complicated plots, or fought my own morals so much that I just stalled and never went back. Almost 13 years ago, just before my wacky, sex soaked story titled ‘TANYA', I wrote 5 parts of SCENARIOS. Besides being riddled with errors, run-on sentences, lack of punctuation and capitalization, there were a couple of great ideas, a couple ‘scenarios' or scenes that could have scorched, but didn't get fully developed. Now with a refresh, better approach, great editing from Dennis, and my patented humor, Sara will finally get her due.

Nudity, sex, exposure, sex, tease, plenty of ENF, and sex.

With SCENARIOS rewritten as HOT MESS, I am flipping the script again by taking what was, reimagining it instead of editing, refreshing and reposting it. My hope is that by telling the story better, extending the scenes, adding more tease, sex and content, it should jump off the pages. Please accept if the sex scenes between Sara and Jenny are brief or skipped, this story is about the sex, fun and trouble that Sara and Jenny get into... and who gets into them, pun intended. SCENARIOS will remain in archive as it was, the OG for this new story, some of what occurred will be retold with more detail, sex and tease. HOT MESS is what could have been, spawning from what was, and I truly hope you like it.

Any people, places, names, products or events mentioned are done so without permission or endorsement, this is a work of fiction. All descriptions of Sara, Jenny (previously known as Tara) Mark and Chris will defer to what is described here moving forward.

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Parts of this original story come from SCENARIOS, written and posted Spring 2013

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My boss Andy is 30 years old, 5' 9" tall, has soft brown eyes, short brown hair, is good looking in that lonely guy at the dance way, and after some pretty good sex, blew it with mind games that included complimenting me, flirting, then telling me we should just be coworkers and he'd rather spend time with his sister. I can't wait to see his face when I quit on Monday.

The manager of the downtown Suites Hotel, Jeff is 40, 6' tall, has short black hair, excellent personality, is in great shape, handsome, and fucks like a stud. He asked me to come there to investigate excessive turnover, which I did, but also screwed me like a lightbulb and offered me a pretty good job. He wasn't kidding when he said his wife was hotter than he deserved or that they have an open marriage. She is and they do, trust me.

Zoe is 37 years old, 6' tall with long, vibrant red hair, crisp green eyes, and a body straight out of every man's imagination, she looks like a fitness instructor fucked a fashion model and then curated the perfect female. She also is the majority owner of the suites hotel and sort of forgot to mention it when she was seducing me and sharing me with her husband.

Jenny is 23 but looks 21, has long blonde hair, a captivating smile, an absolutely perfectly fit body, and a magnetic presence that drew me in from the first second we met. She is so beautiful she made it hard to concentrate, and although fully dressed, she still made my body rev up. While I swore never to date a guy until I found the right one, barely minutes after meeting Jenny we were a couple and I cannot wait until she gets back from work to spend time with her.

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