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Since I don't have a blog, and messaging through ES internal mail only reaches a portion of my readers, LOOSE ENDS seems to serve as the best outlet for information to my fans, my readers, and to everyone on EROTIC STORIES.

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It's been a long Summer, and thanks to life, loss, depression and inability to concentrate, I have not been able to write anything since this past Winter, late January and early February of 2025. I had several stories, chapters and parts finished, Dennis edited them, and I parsed them out over Spring and early Summer. I have started several stories, all stalled. I worked on new chapters or parts of some of my stories, also stalled. The truth is, there is not enough time in the day, watching WWE has become a second job with it being on 3 and 4 nights a week, not counting PLE's. Aside from that, I have been searching for work, catching up on my shows, and taking stock of life. Don't feel sorry for me, choices make us who we are and define us.

I am including two partial stories/chapters in this episode of LOOSE ENDS, and would like your thoughts. First is about half, maybe two thirds of LIT RPG 4. I loved the idea of LIT RPG, thought the AI playground had no limits, and Dennis loved the story despite having no clue what LITRPG's were. Regardless, of all my recent stories, each part was blasted, and the reason it took nearly a year to write and post 3 parts. I have been hammered for ‘the outlandish story' despite it being erotic fiction. I got called out for ‘no guy is that lucky', again in a fictional erotic story. Worse, several readers were upset that the story contains ‘too much sex' and that ‘all the women are willing and submissive'.

Uhm, that was the point of the story.

So, if you would, read what I have finished of part 4, let me know what you think, specifically about the "LOOT", and the overall direction of the story. Your feedback is valuable and will let me know where to go with the ending of the part, and maybe the overall story. I personally think it could go several more parts and just incorporate so many erotic and sexual cliches. See what you think.

The second excerpt is from a new story idea I am working on, but stalled because I worry in advance that readers will miss the sex, lust and humor while focusing on yet another ‘older woman, understanding girlfriend' tale. It's tentatively titled "WE CAN'T KEEP DOING THIS", and could change based on your feedback and where I decide to take the story overall.

Thank you and I look forward to your feedback, thoughts and ideas.

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Excerpt from LIT RPG 4, unfinished and still in development (9-25-2025)

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Amidst the non-stop sex and tongue in cheek humor, I'm telling a story that when read back is just like an actual rpg, filled with tough choices that matter. Don't worry though, unlike most of my stories where I drop hints and hope readers grasp the plot, this one is fun with a bold, open, intentionally cliched story.

I received a surprising complaint that this story has too much recap and explanation. Ironically, I also got a couple of emails asking to explain things more. So I am assuming and hoping you have read the prior parts, but will have Mike and the girls discuss things in lieu of recap because there's a lot going on in this story. Not to repeat myself, but the cliches, the harem, and the tongue in cheek poke in the eye to most RPG's, are all intentional. As for the surprise in this chapter with Courtney and Mike, it's an inside joke to all of my longtime readers.

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