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LOOSE ENDS 11 (fm:seduction, 6505 words) [11/11] show all parts

Author: jwdoney
Added: Sep 27 2025Views / Reads: 345 / 266 [77%]Part vote: 9.34 (4 votes)
My ES blog continues with some personal info and 'excerpt' previews of 'LIT RPG 4' and something new titled 'WE CAN'T KEEP DOING THIS'. I look forward to your feedback, ideas, and thoughts.
 


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I'm trying something new, a ‘LIT RPG' story. It may not be the official description or explanation, but a ‘LIT RPG' story involves a self aware character who is able to see and manipulate stats as he or she levels up, like in an RPG. If you don't know what an RPG is or don't care, this might not be the story for you. If you like sexy, funny and hot situations that are not carbon copied, this IS the story for you.

The fact that there is a harem is just coincidental... and adds to the fun.

There will be more product name dropping than usual in this story as my characters will not only be self aware, but once things get going, you'll understand why there are so many references to so many things. All of which are used without permission, without any negative connotations, and with all due respect. So more so than ever, any people, places, names, products or events mentioned are done so without permission or endorsement, this is a work of fiction.

Michael is 20, 6' tall, athletic with hazel eyes and short brown hair. Jenna is 20, 5' 10", fit, cute and wholesome, with blue eyes and long blonde hair. Kim is 20, 5' 11", athletic and bold, with crisp green eyes and long red hair. Courtney is 19, 5' 10", fit, and innocent, with light blue eyes and long blonde hair. Jamie is 38, 5' 11", fit, lusty, has brown eyes and long, light brown hair. April is 20, 5' 9", fit, large chested, has blue eyes and long dark hair.

Jenna and Courtney are sisters, Kim is Jenna's best friend, Jamie is Jenna and Courtney's mom, and April is friends with and cheers with Jenna and Kim.

Camille is early 20's, has long, light blonde hair, blue eyes, a fit body, submissive to Michael and thinks they are to be married.

Irina, her mother, is early 40's, has long, dirty blonde hair, blue eyes, a fit body, and is willing to sleep with Mike to make sure he's a match for her daughter.

As far as Mike and the girls know, both Camille and Irina are AI creations, part of the ‘litrpg' game world, and for some reason are very sexually submissive as if that's normal.

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The shortest possible version is Kim and Jenna are best friends and have been cheering together since middle school. Both 20 years old like me, I was dating Kim and broke up with her to go out with Jenna. Kim just refuses to accept the break up and has sex with me, with Jenna's permission. After more than a year of flirting with and chasing me, Jenna's 19 year old sister Courtney finally convinced me to sleep with her and wants to continue doing so. She also asked her sister to break up with me so she could be my girlfriend. To add to the mix, after boldly flirting with me, teasing me, then fucking me, Jenna and Courtney's smoking hot MILF mom Jamie, a woman so hot she defies her 38 years of age, wants as much of me as she can have. Their friend April, once we had sex, admitted she has hoped for a while now that she hoped I would notice her and fuck her.

This is better than any of the erotic stories my dad reads.

That we're sure of, none of the girls can get hurt or pregnant while inside the ‘game'. Same for me, the getting hurt part. Time flows slowly, on something like a 1/10 ratio, which is good because so far we've been in and out of the game three times that I'm sure of and in there for a fair amount of time each time, no alliteration intended. We can't wear clothes while inside the game, no one can, it seems, everyone is happy, horny and blissful, and as we all began to notice, and Jamie highlighted, the women WANT to submit to me, especially sexually.

As for the loot I've begun to collect?

Well, you won't believe it and I still don't.

As Courtney fights her feelings, desires and jealousy, she has gone from shy, quiet and polite to loud, aggressive and jealous. To the point where she's close to fighting her friends, sister, and even her mother to claim me solely as hers. When all of this began, even before Jamie triggered the ‘litrpg' for the first time, mom had commented how my growing harem of Kim, Jenna and Courtney was only lacking a clingy blonde and a slutty MILF. Barely hours later, and my life in and out of the game had sweet, loyal blonde Jenna, feisty, take no shit, redhead Kim, clingy, loving blonde Courtney, slutty, down to fuck MILF Jamie, and a mix of all cliches, sexy and willing brunette April.

Not to mention lusty AI mom and daughter Camille and Irina.

If I forgot something, I'll edit it in before I post this.

I see you DEADPOOL, hey there SHE HULK.

Jamie had somehow pulled us out of the game just as I was being fucked by Irina, who had said she was planning to fully test my stamina. All of us, me and the girls had been in some sort of sexual act when we appeared in the living room of Jamie's house. Courtney got pissed, cussed and shouted, then activated and returned to the game. My cock was throbbing, the girls were still gathering themselves, and Jamie said "Since I can't get pregnant, I'll take the bullet." I didn't get a chance to think, speak or complain as Jamie pulled at me, I was deep inside her tight, wet pussy, and then I saw stars and exploded. I thrust and pumped into Jamie who took it all then asked "Feel better honey? I bet you didn't even know you were that close?" I was dizzy, confused, mildly embarrassed, then gasped "I just stuck it inside you and came". Jamie rubbed my back then purred in my ear "A fantasy you didn't even know you had".

April and Kim were staring at the device with the word "ACTIVATE" lit green and Kim said "We should check on Courtney". Together they pressed the button and vanished even as Jenna made a noise and said "Plus they know they can get laid in there". I pulled out of Jamie and said "Thank you". She blushed "Anytime" then held my face to look into her eyes and repeated "Anytime". Jenna exhaled "Mom" but Jamie said "Do not shame me little girl. I have let you sleep with Michael for the last year that I know about, put up with you and Kim sharing him like a CD, all while your sister has reached CRIMINAL MINDS level obsession with him. There's no going back from any of this, so as long as we keep secrets, ask Mike if he wants all the sex and love to stop?"

Jamie used the silence to go use the bathroom while I stood there.

I just stood there trying to gather my thoughts.

They were scattered everywhere.

So many of them.

Finally I said "I love you Jenna and that will never change, but Courtney is close to flipping the script and Jamie's right, name one guy that doesn't dream about what we're doing?" Jenna narrowed her eyes at her mother returning from the bathroom and said "Fine, on one condition. No more rules". Jamie said "If you mean, no more rules regarding sex, sharing beds, or whether any of us wear clothes with the curtains closed, then my answer is yes". I sighed, Jamie smirked at me, then said "You and your sister, as well as Kim and April still have to listen to me regardless of all the sex. That will not change or that strange, wicked device can vanish". Jamie was pointing at the ‘litrpg' book and I asked "Wait? Wasn't that a game board earlier?" Jamie blinked as Jenna said "I thought it was a box?" As we all stared at it, the book shimmered, then we were staring at a flat game board and Jamie gasped "Holy fuck, Did you see that?"

There was a slow moving, visible wave that rolled over all three of us, then Jamie sighed and said "I feel so... calm". Jenna sighed "I love you" and held me as I sighed "I'm so happy". Now the device was a book again with just the word "ACTIVATE" glowing green.

No one was going to believe any of this.

Jamie asked "Knowing all the urges will return, should we check on the girls and your future wife?" I laughed, "You're talking about Courtney, right?" Jenna said "Oddly, that didn't even make me mad". Jamie got a wicked, naughty look on her face and asked "Could you imagine if he married me and became your stepfather? Oh the cliches". Jenna huffed "Now that pissed me off", then she touched the device and vanished. I asked "Did you notice the voice commands?" Jamie said "I did. The girls had to explain it to me, something about TREK WARS?" I laughed, muttered "STAR TREK", then said "Something like that".

Jamie blushed then asked "Your point handsome?" I asked "Do you think I can get the game to clear the memory or do something to remove Camille and Irina, or at least get them to forget me?" Jamie blinked "Why would you want to do that? Isn't all of it about fantasy?" I said "Sure, but if I get to be with you, Jenna and Courtney, a smoking hot MILF and her two gorgeous daughters, as well as Kim and April, two of their hottest friends, all of the girls are cheerleaders, everyone gets along, and the sex is unlimited, why would I need a couple of AI women?" Jamie stared at me then asked "How can you possibly be romantic in the midst of a harem, which by the way, no one thinks exists outside of porn, erotica or UTAH?"

I sighed then said "I just happen to know firsthand how lucky feels".

My phone sounded, sounded again, then Jamie asked "Who's that honey?" We were standing there in her living room naked, both of her daughters and their two hottest friends were all inside the game, so I wasn't sure who could be messaging me, aside from maybe mom or dad. I went to my phone, touched the notifications from my banking app, and dropped my phone.

I was shocked, stunned, frozen and stalled.

All at once.

I just stared at nothing, trying to refire my brain or move my body. I heard Jamie gasp, a long inhale followed by "Is that the mystery loot? How is that possible?"

I stared at Jamie, then looked again at my bank balance...

Almost 4 hundred dollars had been deposited from an unknown source, three deposits totalling $387 dollars. Jamie scrolled, asked "Do you think it's real?", then asked "It can't be real, right?" I took my phone, opened up EPIC SEVEN, Jamie laughed "Can't that wait honey?" I shook my head and said "Trust me". Jamie laughed "Michael, you are fucking me, both of my daughters, two of their friends, and will hopefully move in with us. Never ask if I trust you". I smiled, went to the in-game store inside EPIC SEVEN, bought an overpriced $20 pack, and after I received it, closed the app, checked my bank, and sure enough it deducted the money. I still had almost $500 including the money I already had in there. Jamie rolled her eyes and said "Not sure what that proved? I'm more curious what the cost of all this sex, lust, desire and free money is".

Yeah, she did air quotes for "free money".

I asked "Can we keep this a secret until I figure out how and why?" Jamie said "Yes, but you need to consider something. I have money and so do your parents, all of you kids have what you want, but if those four young ladies figure out that you have a source of quite possibly unlimited income... well... honey... wars have been started for less". I said "I would share it". Jamie said "No. Still war. Courtney would want more than the others because of you being her property and all. Kim might think she gets more than April with you being her property and all. Jenna might want a larger share for letting Courtney think you're hers". I sighed "War" and Jamie said "Exactly".

I silenced my phone then said "It's our secret and you and I can figure it out later". Jamie smiled then asked "Have you given any thought to the sleeping arrangements if we ever stay out of the game for more than an hour?" I grinned and Jamie blushed, then asked "How about I make you a deal?" I nodded and Jamie asked "If we, meaning you, can convince Kim and April to go home at some point, I will trick the girls into thinking it's their idea for the four of us to share a bed". I gasped "My God" and blushing Jamie said "With any luck I'll be screaming that all night long". We started kissing until Jamie pushed me away and said "Let's do it in the game since you seem to recharge in there". I said "Yes, but two things when we get in there. No matter what Jamie, remind me to change or check two things". Rubbing herself against me to make her point that she wanted to do it, I was about to give in and fuck her when she purred "Tell me what they are. Hurry"

I said "We have to see if the game can forget Camille and Irina or at least have them forget me". Jamie panted "You were serious about that?" I nodded, then said "I also want to see if we can eat inside there. Like maybe food dispensers or replicators?" Jamie blinked "Huh?" I said "Trust me" and she purred "I believe we already established our trust at White House level to say the least?" I grinned and said "I want to fuck you" and Jamie panted "I think you should". We were about to touch the device to enter the game world when Jamie said "Michael? I love you. Thank you for reminding me that I'm still a woman". I held Jamie, put my lips to her ear, and said "I love you too Jamie. I love that you are now my cum slut fuck toy".

Jamie gasped as we touched the button and entered the game.

Again there was a flash, a blur, then we were in the middle of a large grassy field. No one was around. Anywhere. No enemies, no NPCs or townspeople, no town, none of the girls. Just lots of grass and silence. Jamie sighed "Anticlimactic" and I laughed "Underwhelming was my word". Jamie turned to face me and asked "Cum slut fuck toy? Is that any way to talk to your mother in law?" I grinned and she returned the grin to say "There's an invisible timer you can't see counting down. Hurry up and do your two things because when that timer hits zero, I will fuck you". I smiled and Jamie smiled back then said "I'm not joking Michael. Get your tasks done because I want you inside me".

I stared at Jamie, a woman who is as close to perfection as God allows. Besides being fit, hot and sexy, she was one of the nicest women I have ever known and has always been tolerant when it came to me and her daughters. Especially now with Courtney trying to push everyone else aside and claim me for her own. Jamie was brewing and whatever combination of pheremones and urges the game had been pushing, something told me she had wanted to sleep with me before the ‘litrpg' came in the mail. Instead of anything I had planned, including hopefully erasing Camille's memory of our impending wedding, I stepped up to Jamie who moaned as she embraced me and pulled me to the ground. We were kissing furiously and suddenly I was deep inside Jamie's tight pussy. Her wet, hot, tight pussy.

I started to fuck Jamie but she touched me, soothed me, calmed me, and asked "Make love to me?" I slowed, stared into her eyes, then asked "Would you do anything for me?" Jamie purred "Yes" then closed her eyes and held me as I sped up and we fucked. Flat out fucked. I drove Jamie like a high performance sports car and slammed her like a screen door as she writhed and bucked beneath me. I was getting closer, could feel the pressure building, then Jamie's eyes shot open and she stared into my soul as her orgasm arrived in a hurry. Even as she screamed and shook, I exploded in a massive climax that tingled my entire body and I could taste all kinds of fruits.

I was dizzy, felt warm all over, and thrust into Jamie until I had nothing left and she just held me while rubbing my back. We were quiet, lay like that still intertwined for a couple of minutes, then I said "The more time I spend with you, the more I want to". Jamie sighed "Same. I feel the same way, baby". We kissed for a moment then Jamie said "I have a terrible idea, something that I should feel deep shame for considering, but I may have a solution that could keep Courtney from snapping". I exhaled as we got up, used yet another questionable bucket of murky water to clean up with.

Why and how were they always right nearby after I had sex?

If this were one of those stories dad reads by that JWDONEY guy, there would be a conveniently placed shower nearby.

As we wiped up, I asked Jamie "What short of marriage would keep Courtney from losing it?" Jamie smiled and I froze. It's not that I wouldn't marry Courtney, she would probably be an incredible wife. But I was 20, she's 19, and we're still in college and trying to figure out life. Jamie asked "For the most part, anything can happen in here right? Why not marry her inside this game ‘pgr' thing?" I chuckled "RPG" then smirked at Jamie and said "Computer. Gag and tie Jamie to a bed".

With a flash of light, it actually happened!

HOLY FUCK!

Jamie's eyes were wild and filled with fire as she pulled and thrashed at her bindings while muffled noise came past her gag. I was harder than ever in seconds as I grinned at Jamie who stopped fighting her bondage and stared at me wide eyed as she clearly asked "You wouldn't?" I got onto the bed, into position between her spread legs, and just pushed into her tight pussy. Jamie was wetter than she has been so far, her body seemed to be vibrating, and I just fucked her. For me and any guy who has ever stared at her and wishes he had a shot. I stroked deep, hard and fast, gave Jamie everything I had, and she had a vibrating orgasm just before I came deep inside her perfect body. In a final act of defiance and domination, I pulled out of Jamie, smirked at her, cleaned up, and left her there bound, gagged, and leaking our juices.

I stood close and said "Now there should be no doubt that you are my cumslut fuck toy. I own you Jamie and will fuck you whenever I want". She gasped, even with the gag in her mouth, her eyes were filled with fury, then I said "Computer. Release Jamie in 10 minutes. Override any other request but mine". The game said "Confirmed" and Jamie glared at me as I smiled then walked off to find the girls. I walked for a bit, then stopped and pulled up the controls. I went through menus until finally I asked "Computer? How do I set parameters that the game resets every time we exit?" There was silence than the game said "Settings saved". I asked "Computer, please locate Kim?" Instead of responding with her location, Kim literally materialized in front of me and said in mid sentence "... has no idea that I... what the fuck babe? Did you just teleport me?"

Instead I asked "He has no idea that you, what?"

Kim smiled and said "That I will fuck you regardless of who claims you or likes it". I smiled and said "I want you to be a part of my life forever". Kim stood completely still. Her fit naked body was as amazing as always and I was getting hard again as she inhaled, stared deep into my eyes, then asked "Did you just propose?" I said "No, but only because if I don't marry Courtney, we're all in trouble". Kim sighed "That's true, she's got it bad. Man, it feels like a week has gone by since we were in the pool and then we messed around". I blinked because she was right, that had only been a couple hours ago, no more than three or four, but it felt like days had passed.

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Excerpt from WE CAN'T KEEP DOING THIS, in development (9-25-2025)

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It's been 8 months since I wrote anything and 7 since I posted anything original, but I'm hoping to fight past the depression, writer's block, and scattered negative feedback complaints that combined to distract me from writing. I realize some of the plot that will unfold here has been done, especially by me, but amidst the ‘same old story' are some fun, funny, and sexy original ideas and what I think are some scorching scenes. Plus I plan to flesh out certain scenes and scenarios that may have been rushed previously.

MILD SPOILER ALERT - - - I wanted to use the title "CAN'T TAKE ANYMORE" because it would fit the story perfectly, but that gem was used years ago on a story of a doctor pushed beyond his limits. Curiously, "CAN'T TAKE ANYMORE" is top of my list for a refresh, new content, or maybe just a reboot. Stay tuned for that, and thanks for reading.

Any people, places, names, products or events mentioned are done so without permission or endorsement, this is a work of fiction. Names have been randomly generated then chosen to suit the characters.

My name is Jason, I am 19 years old, 5' 11" with short black hair, hazel eyes, a fit, athletic body, and a smile that matches my charm. I live with my girlfriend Katie and her single, divorced mom Ashley, an absolute knockout gorgeous fitness instructor who is proof that perfection exists. Quite possibly the most beautiful woman I have ever met, Ashley is 38 but looks 30, is 5' 10", has long, brown hair, soft blue eyes, with a body sculpted purely to be stared at and lusted after. To be completely honest, Ashley is quite possibly the nicest, kindest, sweetest, and hottest female alive. The weirdest thing is, Ashley knows of my undying lust and desire for her, and she has never made me feel bad about, has never been rude or humiliated me. Mostly she just smiles, thanks me, flirts on occasion, and tells me constantly how lucky her daughter is. Stranger still, Katie knows of my lust for her mother and teases me that while it will never happen, she thinks her mom likes the attention I pay her.

If there is a lust, sex or porn based cliche that explains my all encompassing want and need to fuck Ashley, I have thought of, imagined and hoped for it. Twice. I would walk through fire, crawl across nails and broken glass, stand in freeway traffic, and tell Brock Lesnar how stupid he is. I would literally do anything to sleep with Ashley and if I had my way, there would be no sleeping, just SEX! Even though my fantasy will never come true, my frustration is compounded by the love of my life, my girlfriend of three years, Katie. My best friend in life, Katie just turned 19, is a petite 5' 8", with bright blue eyes, long, soft blonde hair, a fit, near perfect body, that includes a firm ass and small but firm 32C breasts. I met Katie in Sophomore year of High School, asked her out, and we've been inseparable since. One afternoon just after graduating high school, Katie and her mom asked me to move in and Ashley stared me in the eyes and said she had zero doubts I would marry her daughter.

Katie and I do everything together, get along GREAT, don't fight, we even have 3 college classes together. Everything is perfect except for one small thing. She's still a virgin and wants to wait until we're married for sex. I've had sex, it's great, I like it and want to have it. Unfortunately, my love and respect for Katie conflicts with my sheer desire to fuck her hot, petite body through my mattress or maybe a wall. She's not a tease, but we get each other riled up and then she asks me to stop or chill. We've tried everything, I've seen Katie naked more than her doctor, and when I can talk her into spending the night, we push every limit and spend the entire night naked. She's given me blowjobs and handjobs, rubbed me off, let's me rub against her cute pink slit and even her firm ass.

She just wants to wait until we're married for actual sex.

It's not one sided, I've gone down on Katie dozens of times, fingered her to many an orgasm, and tried in vain to pull the ‘just the tip' trick. The truth is, unless I go buy her a ring and drag her to a Priest, I have a better chance of fucking Ashley than I do Katie.

And that's where the true frustration lies.

While I can describe Katie's naked body in detail, my dreams and fantasies are filled and haunted by an unfulfilled wish of seeing Ashley nude. Despite being three levels hotter than fuck, she doesn't create content, doesn't post sexy pics of herself, so my prayer of finding her on ONLY FANS goes unanswered. Except for the fact that Ashley is proud of her body and wears clothes that show it off.

Sometimes not very many clothes!

Rather than try to recall every outfit she's worn and how many rock hard erections she's caused me, the shortest version is it seems and feels like Ashley doesn't wear any more than she has too. When I first moved in about a year ago, Katie would laugh, tease, and make jokes that her mom might want to put more on because I would literally stand where I was drooling and staring when I saw her in a short skirt, low cut top, tight shorts, a bikini, and for some reason... lingerie.

I may never know if Ashley was intentionally teasing me, and I don't care.

Like any good older woman erotic story, I was lucky enough to take pictures. The hilarious part was that it all stemmed from me staring at Ashley one afternoon out by our pool, mesmerized at her fit, perfect, tan body in a sexy blue bikini that really didn't cover much. Katie joked that I should take a picture and Ashley smiled then stood there as if posing. From that day on, she would slip into my bedroom in various sexy outfits, including nothing but lingerie, stand there until I took a picture, then blush and hurry off. Then the selfies started and I really don't know how my phone hasn't melted. I still haven't fulfilled my life goal and seen Ashley naked, but TIFFANY STRATTON became WWE WOMANS CHAMPION and the OKLAHOMA CITY THUNDER finally won the NBA TITLE, so I will continue to hope and pray.

And then it happened!

I would love to make up a ridiculous situation how things finally happened, but the truth is, after a long night of making out naked with Katie, I awoke hornier than ever and out of my mind wishing to fuck a female. Whether it be Katie or Ashley, I was good with either option. Last night our hours-long makeout resulted in a massive eruption thanks to her giving me an incredible handjob. That was followed by me going down on her until she lost her mind and failed to stifle or suppress an explosive orgasm. We cleaned up, held each other, and fell asleep happy.

Then for some reason this morning Katie was moody, distant, took a seperate shower, and left for work without a kiss. I was sitting there naked, hard, and confused when God's gift to men, Ashley came in the room pretty much naked herself. I was holding my phone staring at the text from Katie that said "I need to think about some things. Stop texting me and let me think". Ashley was in the room before I realized it, she gasped quite a bit of oxygen, then shut my door and leaned back against it pretty close to naked. She had on the thinnest, tiniest, sheerest white panties that did not cover any more than they had to. Her top was some kind of tight, sheer, white sports shirt, sleeveless, cut off just below her massive chest, and I can't be any clearer that Ashley was essentially naked. She stared at my stiff, erect cock, gasped again, then completely shocked me when she moved to sit beside me, touched the tip of my cock with her warm finger, and asked "Why are you so hard baby?"

I blinked, inhaled, exhaled, then said the dumbest thing possible.

I exhaled "Ashley, I would give anything to fuck you".

Time froze. No one moved or spoke.

Then Ashley slowly grasped my hard shaft and asked quietly "Define anything?" We stared into each other's eyes, and then I finally understood the romantic moment I have seen so many times on movies and TV. Hell froze over as Ashley accepted it when I kissed her. On the lips at first, then she let go of my throbbing cock, slid her hand behind my neck, and I suddenly understood passion. We kissed for a minute, two, five, and then next thing I knew, we were on my bed, I was atop Ashley's perfect body, and we were full on making out. No matter what I did, Ashley didn't hesitate, didn't say no, didn't try to stop me.

If anything, it was as if she wanted the same thing I did.

Hot, scorching sex.

When I started kissing her neck, moving toward her cleavage, Ashley shifted, moved, and then her tight top was off and I think she tossed it to the floor. I savored her huge boobs, kissed, grabbed, rubbed and sucked every inch of them, and made sure to pay plenty of attention to her stiff, perky nipples. Ashley was moaning, writhing beneath me, and my heart nearly stopped when she reached between us, grasped my HARD dick, then flirted "Mmmm, just making sure". The look of lust, desire and submission in Ashley's eyes as she shifted to help me peel off her panties is forever burned into my memory, but when I moved to lick her pink, perfect pussy, she blushed and panted "Another time for that".

We stared into each other's eyes until Ashley asked "All the staring, flirting, lust and attention you've given me?" I swallowed and nodded. Ashley breathed "I noticed" and then pulled at me until the tip of my cock was pressing against her soft, wet lips. Again, with a mind blowing combination of excitement, desire and submission, Ashley moved her hands to my sides and purred "Take me". It was slow at first, despite being wetter than Niagara Falls, Ashley's pussy was tight. She coaxed me, spoke soft instructions, encouraged me, and I was so hard I could have pounded nails when I finally pushed about halfway inside Ashley. She worked her hips, moved her body, soothed and guided me, and I was making love to the woman of my dreams, the most perfect female on the planet. I stroked slowly, deeply, and felt pleasure like never before as Ashley touched me, rubbed me, showered me with affection and attention that sent me past any point I could ever recall.

Suddenly I was close, my cock was throbbing, I could feel the eruption looming, then out of nowhere Ashley exploded into an epic orgasm. Her body shook and writhed, she gripped me while screaming through her climax, and I lost it in a massive explosion that dimmed the lights. I thrust and pumped, gave Ashley everything I had, and when we lay there spent and sated, she rubbed my back and asked me how I felt. I sighed, we kissed softly for what seemed like several minutes, then I said "I love Katie with my whole heart and every breath". Ashley said "I know. Trust me a mother knows. I see it and feel it. I meant what I said when I told you that day that I see the two of you married". We kissed, then Ashley led both of us naked to her master bathroom, started the shower, smiled at me while peeing, then gently pushed me into the shower.

As we washed up, Ashley asked "So now answer my question. The clouds parted, God answered your prayer, and you slept with me. How do you feel?" I said "Ashley, you know I think of you as a Goddess. To me, you're the perfect female and twice as hot". Blushing, Ashley stared at me for a long moment, then she said "That right there. That attention, the desire, the devotion. When you ask yourself, that's why we did this. No man has ever made me feel so good about myself like you do. I love you Jason, and not just as Katie's mom. You're special and I slept with you because that's how you treat me, You make me feel special".

We kissed, washed up and rinsed off, but as we were toweling dry, Ashley had a look in her eye and flirted "Would you mind helping me make my bed before we get dressed?"

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I look forward to your thoughts, feedback, ideas, and with any luck, both of these excerpts will get finished, edited and posted, especially WE CAN'T KEEP DOING THIS which I think has great potential. I also personally hope to keep writing LIT RPG, so let's see what you all think.

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