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BREAKING BECKY was, and still is, one of the most unique and sex filled stories I have ever written. In theory, it's three stories in one and most readers agree that it was exciting and plausible despite being over the top and impossible to actually take place. Besides the shocking submission and humiliation of Becky that she wanted to occur, cute, sexy and aggressive Kelsey was fun to create and had depth. Most importantly, as chapter one unfolded, the premise of the store being the ultimate sexual playground had limitless potential. I can promise you readers this, two massive cliches will happen that add jet fuel to this story, and Becky is not prepared for when Ryan and Kelsey team up to tease, expose and humiliate her.

Recap is minimal with the assumption you have read part 1 which just reposted a few days ago. Besides being previewed way back in LOOSE ENDS 9, BREAKING BECKY part 1 was posted last Spring but did not get enough votes to move to archive. Now with time having passed and this second chapter completed, part 1 has been refreshed and posted for your enjoyment. Amidst the sex, domination, lust, aggressive romance with Kelsey and more sex, there is more story than usual, which is necessary for the overall picture.

I look forward to your thoughts, ideas and feedback on both parts. Thank you for reading.

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This story is inspired by, and a tribute to "SALES ASSISTANT CECILE" by JS DEACON.

In possibly one of the BEST stories/comics to ever depict ENF, FORCED EXPOSURE, and arousal from humiliation, ‘SALES ASSISTANT CECILE' or ‘SAC' is a near perfect mix of forced gradual stripping, exposure, public exposure, embarrassment, humiliation and submission I have ever seen or read. The writer/author uses charm, intimidation, shame and dominance without ever making the reader uncomfortable about what happens to Cecile. Honestly, it's fucking hot. I've found ‘SAC' on E-HENTAI and it could be other places, including in search if you like. My take of a similar situation will have more ENF and a cliched, forbidden background story that explains why ‘Becky' is subjected to such exposure and humiliation.

I hope you like it, but for sure, I do not advocate anything I write, all people should be treated with love and kindness, especially women, and most importantly, blondes.

Any people, places, names, products or events mentioned are done so without permission or endorsement, this is a work of fiction. Names were chosen based on what fits the character, not related to any I have ever used, and unrelated to anyone I know in real life. Parts of this story are accelerated and others slowed down. This is intentional as well as certain sex scenes abbreviated or skipped. This story is about the tease, exposure, humiliation and the lust that causes all of it. Enjoy.

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My name is Ryan, I am 21 years old, stand 6' tall, have short black hair, hazel eyes, and am in good, athletic shape. I have always been popular, dated sporty girls and cheerleaders, and played baseball and football in high school. At college I got bored, left during the third semester, and found a really cool job in a specialty boutique a few blocks from my small house. My parents have money, but they got tired of me being out late and bringing different girls home, so they rent me a small house that they own across the street from where I grew up. It's great because I can cross the street for lunch or dinner, do my laundry for free, watch sports with my dad, and my mom cleans my house whether I like it or not.

If I sound spoiled, I guess maybe I am. In fairness, I mow both yards, rake leaves, shovel and snow blow in the winter, but nothing beats free laundry, homemade meals, very inexpensive rent, and a mom who cleans better than Martha Stewart. Yeah, I'm spoiled.

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