Hello guest! (Level: guest) Log in

You can change the width of the story text shown below:
Use how much percent of the screen width?

[ default ] [ 10% ] [ 20% ] [ 30% ] [ 40% ] [ 50% ] [ 60% ] [ 70% ] [ 80% ] [ 90% ] [ 100% ]

Options: Plain text or PDF (fanclub only!) version  |  Mark story  |  Mark author

Don't forget to vote for this story, in the yellow voting box below the story!

jwdoney has been interviewed! Click here to read interview.

Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story

Xbox when Jessica got home from work. She boldly undid her blouse on the way past us, then came back from her bedroom in the skimpiest lilac colored lingerie I have ever seen. Instead of any reaction I would have expected, Taylor blushed, crowded closer, and purred "Have fun baby." With a smile Jessica asked me "Can I see you for a few minutes John?"

The door wasn't even closed to her bedroom when she purred "I need you inside me." Wow, that was new. I took off my shirt and said "I need to be inside you" as I undid my pants. Jessica took off her bra, dropped it to the floor, then stared into my eyes as she slowly, seductively slipped her panties down then stood there naked with them pooled at her feet. I was so horny I couldn't see straight and the next thing I knew we were on the bed, I was deep inside Jessica's tight, wet pussy, and fucking her hard and fast. She held my sides and panted "Yeah? Really fuck me. Fuck me for having to think about doing this with you all day at work." I did what I could to thrust deeper and stroke harder as Jessica panted "Make me cum. Make me see stars."

I think I blacked out, my climax was THAT intense.

When I could somewhat think, I was still fucking Jessica and she seemed to be staring at me as we were doing it. I blinked, she touched my face, then purred "You have no idea how special you are, do you honey?" I felt pretty fucking special screwing Jessica at the moment but gasped "Special?" Jessica's body was tensing beneath me, I could tell her orgasm was close, and she breathed "My daughter can't wait to be intimate with you and all I can think about is you fucking me." Instead of speeding up or slamming Jessica like a door, I slowed, started to make love to her, and she purred "Oh God, I might never stop fucking you" then had a loud, bed shaking orgasm.

I found out in the shower it was her second orgasm.

The evening went well with a surprise that I did not see coming. After dinner, we all watched the last Daniel Craig BOND movie NO TIME TO DIE again. Then Jessica exchanged looks with Taylor, who smiled back at her mother and Jessica surprised me with "While you guys do whatever, I have some content to create." Dad was out of town for three or four days, but it sure seemed like every star possible was aligning when it came to me, Jessica and Taylor.

That wasn't the surprise.

Taylor purred in my ear "You should go see if mom needs any help."

I stared at my beautiful girlfriend who smiled "If you don't give me a reason to be jealous, then there's nothing to worry about." I kissed Taylor who sighed "I don't think I could say no and I'm pretty sure you won't, so let's sleep separately one more night. I love you John, come kiss me goodnight after you help mom." I said "I love you." and after a long, romantic kiss Taylor sighed "I love you more." I went to Jessica's bedroom to find her standing there naked except for an extremely skimpy green thong. She smiled seductively as she slowly turned to face me and I savored her tan, naked body. I panted "Perfection" and Jessica blushed "Close that door and come take your naughty thoughts out on me."

My God we fucked twice and made out in the shower.

I think Jessica might be the definition of insatiable.

With no energy left, I went to Taylor's room but her lights were off and she was sound asleep with her phone in her hand. I gently took it, plugged it in, kissed Taylor softly, then whispered in her ear "I love you as much as possible Tay." She sighed in her sleep with a smile on her face, and I went to bed happy. As I fell asleep I thought "Just one more day and she turns 18."

I had a strange dream about buying rings for Taylor AND Jessica.

Again this morning, I awoke with Taylor in my bed despite going to sleep alone. I had just my underwear on and Taylor was naked except for light blue panties and cute multicolor no show socks. I held her, she was warm and smelled good, she always did. A combination of GAIN, flowers and vanilla that I had yet to figure out. I was rock hard but if anyone was worth ignoring it, worth waiting for, it was Taylor. I only hoped someday she could forgive me for not asking her out sooner, not kissing her or realizing she was everything I could ever want right in front of me.

She was quiet when she came in, but Jessica was fully dressed and blushing as she realized her daughter was topless in my bed. Jessica whispered "Did you guys?" I shook my head and said "We went to bed separately." Jessica pulled at me until I eased away from Taylor and sat on the edge of the bed in just my underwear. She realized how hard I was and smiled her naughty smile then said "If you want, I can take the edge off before I go to work." I smiled, she smiled, then she said "Why don't you spend today with baby girl and I'll start you tomorrow?" I nodded, we kissed warmly, then Jessica touched my face and said "If I were you, knowing what a precious and incredible gift she intends to give you, I would make every moment about her today." I inhaled, then asked "Jess, do you have any doubt how much she means to me?" She shook her head and said "None, but speaking as your... um, well I'm not your stepmom, so... let's say adult female in your life..."

We grinned at each other, then Jessica exhaled "My point was, as things heat up with us, and I can assure you that you and I, we're just getting started." I inhaled, slipped my hand under Jessica's skirt, and she lit up as she said "Chill. I'm yours, but let me finish." She's mine? I asked her "You're mine?" Jessica blushed then said "I would think you know the answer, but in case you don't let's go fuck and maybe you'll remember." I stood, slipped off my underwear, and behind me Taylor gasped. She's seen my hard dick a couple of times, including in the shower and when she jerked me off. Still her inhale caused Jessica to kiss me and say "Raincheck. Lots of them. My point was don't tell me how much you love my daughter. Tell her. Show her. I have no doubts John. None"

And she left, closing the bedroom door as she did.

Taylor slipped out of the bed, shook out her messy long hair, and purred "Let me pee and then I want to make out." As if to further excite, or maybe challenge me, she slipped her panties off, held them out at arms length between two fingers, then dropped them in my dirty clothes basket.

Just one day. One more day.

According to the clock, just less than 16 hours.

I exhaled and said "You are absolute perfection Tay." She blushed then sat down to pee. Even as she tinkled she made a face, wrinkled her nose at me, blushed, then asked "You're getting me excited watching me pee." I laughed "Seriously?" Taylor said "Yes. It's weird, but for some reason it's making me excited." I moved a little closer, stared at Taylor, then slowly stroked the length of my hard, erect cock.

Taylor gasped "What? Why would you do that? Do you want me to attack you?"

I just grinned.

Taylor wiped, washed her hands for some reason, then with a naughty smile I've never noticed before came right up to me. She pushed me down on the bed, and slowly crawled her warm, naked, petite body up mine. I was gone, way past aroused and excited, and after a warm kiss, I rolled us over, got between her legs, and had every intention of teasing her. My plan was to put the tip of my cock against her pussy and fight fire with fire. It went both wrong and right as some combination of our movement, excitement, eagerness and how wet she was, instead of teasing the lips and entrance of her pussy, my cock pushed several inches into Taylor's tight body. Her writhing, gripping me, and gasping made things worse, and better, as now I was balls deep inside Taylor who whined and moaned that it hurt. I think I stroked once or twice and then somehow found strength and effort to pull out of her.

What surprised me was rather than any reaction I expected, Taylor slipped atop me, shifted until her scorching slit was pressing against my hard, enraged shaft, and slowly worked herself against me while we kissed hungrily. Even as her body revved up, and I could feel it happening, my cock began to throb and then I exploded between us. As I spurted, Taylor just kept sliding and rubbing until I was spent and just held her. Again Taylor surprised me when she panted between excited kisses "Tomorrow you can do that inside me. Baby tomorrow you make me a woman." I wasn't sure what to say except what I gasped which was "I want to be with you forever Tay." We kissed then she breathed "I want you to marry me."

With the exception of an ‘X' rated phone call with Jessica around noon that left zero doubt we would be lovers whether dad found out or not, the whole day with Taylor was special, romantic, sensual and amazing. We made out on the couch until she had me so hard it was difficult to concentrate. Then she completely surprised me with a blowjob that resulted in a massive cumshot all over her face and clothes. Later, we were fooling around in the kitchen trying to make lunch, just before Jessica called, and Taylor sighed "I'm hot" then stripped naked. Right there in the kitchen. I lifted her on the counter and licked her pussy until she had a loud orgasm then stared at me with lusty eyes and panted "I don't want to wait. I can't. No one will ever know, baby, and it will be our naughty secret."

I would have. I wanted to.

Thank someone that Jessica called.

After the erotic phone call with her mother, Taylor teased me through lunch then literally pulled me to the bedroom and asked "Just how much resolve do you have?" Oh boy. We got naked, made out, she stroked me through several near eruptions then stopped edging me and let me explode all over her naked body. We took a quick shower then made out some more until I fingered Taylor to an orgasm so intense she was still shaking several minutes after it. We lay there kissing softly and snuggling when Taylor asked "I'm on the pill, but do you think we should use condoms?" I stared at my beautiful girlfriend and asked "Isn't that your decision?" She sighed "My decision would be to get married, have babies and be the hottest married couple ever, but I also know we're too young and would be pissed if we ended up divorced by 25." I laughed "How much thought have you given that?" Taylor huffed, exhaled, glared at me, then huffed "More than you have."

She was out of the bed and the room in a flash...

... and it was HER bedroom.

I found her in the living room sitting on the couch naked and crying. I got one of the blankets, draped it on her, she glared at me, but let me sit beside her. I said "Taylor, I deserve your anger and fury every time you get upset about this subject. I treated you like a friend when you wanted to be more. I let our friendship bloom when you wanted more. I ignored what we had because all I could think about was your mom and I can never apologize enough." Taylor blinked several times, inhaled, exhaled, then asked "So you admit it?"

I nodded and she seemed to relax.

Taylor held my hand, then said "I know you don't understand this baby, but mom and I are closer than most mothers and daughters. I can never explain to you why it doesn't bother me that you and her do stuff. You just need to trust me that I love you and trust you enough to look past what the two of you go off and do." I said "I swear on my life and all I value that no one means more to me than you Taylor. No one." We kissed, I started getting hard, and Taylor sighed as she watched my erection grow. She touched my face and said "Mom needs the attention and I think you do too. Just know that once we finally do stuff, I won't be like other girls. I won't be bossy or play games. I'm learning as we go and do stuff, but I can tell you to your face with complete honesty, what we've done, what we do, for what I know, I like sex."

Taylor gently touched the tip of my cock with her finger, smiled, then stared into my eyes "You also know you're my first in everything. First boyfriend, first kiss, first person I was naked in front of, first of all the stuff we've done. I knew it, but it was still one hell of an impact hearing her say it. Taylor stood, pulled at me to stand, then led us into my bedroom for whatever reason. She looked at the clock. 1:17 pm. With a smile she said "Less than 11 hours babe, then I'm all yours." I pulled Taylor into a breathtaking kiss, then held her and said "You're already mine."

We kissed for minutes, maybe longer, then Taylor grasped my cock and asked "Why do you get so hard?" I said "Your mom is hotter than the sun and absolutely fit. It's no wonder she hasn't melted down ONLY FANS." Taylor's eyes were excited as she waited for me to compliment her. She knew I would, I always do. Even when we were just best friends I complemented and flattered her daily because she deserved it. I kissed Taylor softly and said "You baby, you're just a perfect Goddess and get ready. Are you ready?" She grasped my cock again and breathed "You have no idea how ready I am." I said "We haven't had sex yet and still I can..." Taylor purred "We will, I promise. We will and we'll keep on doing it. I want to marry you John."

We were really making out when Taylor tossed her hair, stared lustily at me, then crawled atop me like she had this morning. She began rubbing her slit against the length of my hard, trapped cock while rubbing her perfect body against mine. I was beside myself when I said "Taylor, I love you so much I would stop messing around with your mom to be with you." Taylor froze as if paused. She stared at me unblinking for longer than I thought possible. I could feel her pussy clench and quiver against my shaft all while my cock pulsed and throbbed.

Lord, even our bodies wanted sex to happen.

Taylor was visibly aroused and not just her soaked pussy and stiff nipples gave it away. She stared at me with desire any man could only wish for. With a long, slow inhale then a similar exhale, Taylor asked "You would stop messing around with mom to be with me?" I nodded as Taylor shifted atop me, grasped my cock, then panted "No one would know. Let's do it." I swallowed and said "No. You deserve better and we would know, you would always know." Taylor's eyes moistened as she stared at me and asked quietly "With as excited as we are right now, you would wait until tomorrow to do it? You would wait and you would stop messing with mom to be with me?" I nodded then said "You are everything to me Taylor. Sex is just a part of us and only a fraction of what makes you so amazing."

The good news is that Taylor let go of my enraged cock, slid off me, and pulled me to her so we could kiss. And we kissed. I took my time kissing, sucking, squeezing and rubbing her boobs and giving her nipples extra attention. I was kissing my way down her body when Taylor asked "Will you at least rub it against me like when I do atop you?" I stared up at my beautiful blonde and asked "Where are you learning this stuff?" She blushed and grinned "Research." I grinned back and asked "Research?" With a smile, Taylor pulled at me until I pressed the length of my shaft against her seriously wet lips. I stared into her eyes and asked "You're trying to trick me? To get me so wound up and somehow I end up inside you and can't say no. You want this to happen today. Now."

Taylor swallowed then asked "How... how do you know?"

I grinned "Because it's what I would do."

Taylor pulled at me, and I was careful how and where I moved, as she held me and asked "Why is our love so strong?" I said "Because we were friends first and always will be." Taylor sighed "I need to tell you a secret, so just trust me, okay?" I said "Always" and Taylor said "I mean it babe. You can't break my trust on this or I'll be really mad and hurt. Promise me. Swear it." I did as Taylor sighed, snuggled me, and said "Mom needs the attention. She says your father is really good to her, but his focus is always on work. The thing that excites mom about you is even with all the attention you give me, and trust me I'm content, she says you make her feel special and wanted. It's not just sex babe, she likes the attention you give her."

Wow.

We kissed a few times, but thankfully the mood was broken. I wanted to fuck Taylor so badly it consumed me, but she also was the most important person in my life and... I exhaled and told her that. Taylor held me tightly, after a couple of moments we kissed, then she laughed "How are you still hard?" I said "I mean every word of this Tay. You have the perfect body. Proportional to your petite size, you are just pure excellence." Taylor moaned and we were really kissing, really seriously making out. I was rubbing my cock against her wet lips and she was panting "I want you John. Please fuck me? Please?" I slowed, pressed the tip of my cock against her needy entrance, and she begged "Please?" I wanted to plunge in so badly. I fought ALL my urges then eased off Taylor and said "You might never know how much I love you."

Again Taylor got atop me. Her pussy was pressed against my throbbing shaft, and she purred "I know because I have been naked, flirting, messing with and teasing you to fuck me. I will never question your love or your resolve." We went back to kissing and rubbing. It wasn't long before my cock pulsed, throbbed, then spewed my cum between us as Taylor kept rubbing against me until I was done. She asked "Now me? Can you make me cum?" Even with my sticky cum on both our bodies, I moved between Taylor's legs, swiped some of my spew aside, then went right at her pink pussy. Taylor was all in as she played with my hair while spreading her legs wide to give me complete access. It didn't take long before she was writhing and squirming in pleasure. Suddenly Taylor gasped "Oh no." moaned "Oh God" then screamed "OH MY FUCKING GOD" and had a massive orgasm.

We lay there in the sweat and cum soaked sheets in silence until Taylor kissed me softly then asked "Shower?" Afterwards, we both got dressed, put the bedding in the washer, and Taylor said "I'll make you a deal as long as you realize you have no choice." I laughed then said "Sure. What?" Taylor said "I will really try to stop messing with you and wait until tomorrow on two conditions." I said "Deal. What are they?" Taylor smiled "You have to pay extra attention to mom when she gets home and we're going to bed early because I'm setting an alarm for 12:01 am. I want my birthday present early." I grinned and asked "Name any man who wouldn't take that deal?"

Taylor narrowed her eyes and said "No other man will ever get that deal."

Wow. Just wow.

Not only did we wash the bedding, we did our laundry and I cleaned the house while Taylor cleaned our bedrooms. It kept us busy and occupied plus Jessica works too hard to come home and clean up after all of us. I must have been thinking when Taylor kissed me softly then said "A million dollars for your thoughts?" I laughed "A million?" Taylor shrugged, "It's what they're worth to me." I said "It's difficult to mess around with Jessica and remember she is a better mom than my own." Taylor held me and said "I can't solve World issues babe, but from what I read, learn and know, men forget women can be mom's and caretakers and also have needs. Do you ever wonder with all this fascination of MILF's and sex with older, mature women, did you ever wonder what happens after the sex?" I sighed "No." Taylor touched my face and said "Exactly what happened today babe. After all our making out and messing around, we did laundry and cleaned the house."

Huh.

Taylor said "Speaking for myself and for mom, we can work and study and cook and clean and still want attention and sex. I just wonder why most men don't think past getting what they want." I said "I just never thought about it" and Taylor said "That's because you're a guy. I love you babe, I plan to marry you, and in a few hours I'm going to give you something no other man will ever receive, but you're a guy and guys think about what they need and want. Women think about how to give those things to them. It's a significant difference."

We started playing DIABLO 4 but a few minutes later Taylor asked "Wanna switch to DIVISION 2?" We did and she said "Look babe? Another week or so and all the new content starts." I sighed "Finally." We were so into the game that suddenly Jessica was standing there and asked "How is it that my two favorite people get along so well?" Taylor said "Hi mom. How was work?"

She sighed "Long because I missed John."

I went around the couch to kiss Jessica and she asked me quietly "Are you okay splitting your attention when your father comes home?" I said "You consume me Jessica and consider that the love of my life is right there hearing me say these things. I can't stop thinking about you. Sexually of course, but I have you on the brain." Jessica said "Short version baby. When he's home, we have to be chill and careful, but nothing has to stop. Our thing is sexual though John. You need to give my baby girl all the romance and attention. If you worked all day at it you still couldn't give her half the love she has for you." I stared at Taylor who had red, moist eyes but breathed "We have a deal babe. Pay attention to mom and then we go to bed early." Jessica blushed and asked "Seriously? Let me guess? You're setting an alarm for just after midnight?"

Taylor huffed "Yes. You have no idea how badly I want this."

Jessica stared at me and said "I know exactly how bad you want this."

I looked at Taylor and said "I love you with my whole heart." Taylor sighed then while seriously blushing said "I love you enough to give you something no other man will ever get and then keep giving it to you." I was around the couch and kissing Taylor in seconds when behind us Jessica asked "John? John? Have I ever asked you for anything?" I turned to look at Jessica and shook my head. With a seductive smile she breathed "Come fuck me."

Taylor actually pushed me towards her mother.

She pushed me and said "Have fun. I'm gonna play FORTNITE."

I followed Jessica to her bedroom and undressed. I wasn't sure how it went for other guys, but ever since things started with Jessica, there have been no games. I knew I was having sex with her. With Taylor it was the same. Once we started making out, fooling around, and doing sexual stuff, there had been zero question, games or tricks. Jessica stood there in her lacy white lingerie and asked "What do you like about my body?" I laughed "Everything." She smiled and asked "What do you want to do to my body?" I felt sheer desire and breathed "I want to fuck you."

Jessica smiled seductively and asked "If I find a way for us to keep on fucking and your father somehow doesn't catch on, will you do naughty things with me?" I gasped "Yes. All day." Jessica said "You have my word then, but I want something in return." I was naked and rock hard as I panted "Name it." Jessica said "My daughter and I have no secrets John. None. I wouldn't ask you this if I even considered she might be hurt, so think carefully before you answer."

I nodded and watched as Jessica, as sultry as possible, took off her bra. She dropped it to the floor, cupped and squeezed her own breasts, and stared at me while doing it. My God! Jessica licked her lips then pushed her panties down, stepped out of them, then stepped closer, but put both her warm hands on my chest. With electricity AND fire in her eyes, Jessica purred "Every chance you get, as long as you're careful, I want you to come after me. I want you to touch me, kiss me, grab me, chase me. I know once you and Taylor become intimate, the two of you might never leave the bedroom, but I want you to make me feel like a woman again. I want you to chase me as if your only goal in life was to fuck me." I blinked then asked before I thought "Why is it you and Tay seem determined to give me everything I want, even before I realize that I want it?"

Jessica asked me "Name one selfish thing you have ever done?" I shook my head and said "I'm not selfish, you know that Jess." She smiled and it hit me. I asked "Because even though I want you I never treated you like anything other than a friend and mom." Jessica blushed then asked "Does it excite you to think of me like a mom then fuck me?" I inhaled as Jessica pulled me to the bed with her, shifted so that her long hair spilled over the pillows, then guided me to enter her hot, wet, snug pussy. As I sank into her she purred "Just imagine fucking me whenever, wherever you want. Imagine me wearing sexy, slutty outfits. John, imagine me finding times and ways to be naked and you just take me." I growled "My God I'll fuck you everyday."

Jessica held me as I stroked into her and panted "That's what I'm hoping."

I've lost count of the sex Jessica and I have had in the three days since she essentially seduced me. I have been willingly fucking her, that's for sure, but knowing I wanted her set her on a sensual course of seduction she fully owns and admits. Since then, even as the love and desire between Taylor and I builds, Jessica consumes me and she knows it. I was really fucking her when she gripped me, moaned "Oh God." then screamed through a long, loud orgasm. I stroked hard and fast because I had noticed she was extra sensitive during her orgasm. Even as she had the longest climax I could recall, I was giving her my all and getting close to cumming myself.

Jessica's eyes rolled back, and I almost thought she was having a second orgasm while having the first and then I lost control and exploded deep inside her. After almost an entire day of messing around with Taylor and spending half that time hard, it felt incredible to cum inside Jessica. We kept going until Jessica purred "It's okay baby. I'm good. We're good." I lay atop Jessica while she rubbed my back and talked about me spending tomorrow with Taylor since it was her birthday and she was going to give herself to me. I asked, "You know I love you, right?" Jessica said "I have zero doubts sweetheart." I asked "How do I deal with my feelings for Taylor? It's like once I stopped ignoring and suppressing them, once you and I started messing around, it's like I can't seem to love her enough. I feel like I don't deserve her."

Jessica kissed me softly, touched my face and neck, played with my hair, then suggested "Let's take a shower. It's awkward to ‘mom' you while you're inside me." I blushed, so did Jessica, and she sighed "I can be both and it's kinda sexy... mostly... but there are limits to my shame." We separated, wiped up with my t-shirt, then got into the shower. Jessica's mood changed and she asked "Are you prepared for the day when she asks us to stop having sex?" I said "No, but I would do anything she asked." Jessica said "The odds are we won't get away with sneaking around long before your father catches us or catches on. Would you like to know my plan?" I swallowed and nodded. Jessica was washing her long hair and said "I plan to offer him two options. He can look the other way while he and I work things out privately, or he can live in this house all by himself because I have no doubt you will go wherever Taylor and I go."

I asked "What does it say about me that I worry more about being with you and Tay than how it affects dad?" Jessica sighed "It makes you human and male. Honestly it doesn't surprise me because you don't have sex with me like we're sneaking around. Frankly you treat me more like a girlfriend and lover, almost as if you think I owe you the sex." I gasped but Jessica asked "Did I say any of that hurt or upset me? You want to know why we're screwing around John? You pursued me with your mind, body and eyes, with your imagination, but you never once said or did anything inappropriate. You showed me you wanted me without ever pressuring me or making me feel bad. You let me decide, you let me choose if and when we became lovers. That's why. That's why I sleep with you and why I will continue to do so until Taylor feels we need to stop."

We kissed, I was getting hard, and Jessica said "The bottom line is my daughter knows how much you love her and has never been happier. I know because she tells me everything. I need you to understand she has been trying to give herself to you and it's driving her crazy that you are determined to wait. I understand why,and as her mother I thank you, but she knows how much you love her. Okay?" I nodded, Jessica and I kissed, but I was really hard and trust me, she knew it. With a naughty smile, she said "Now I want you to choose. We can go again or you can save energy and stamina for Taylor. You know what I want, the question is, what do you want?"

I fucked Jessica in the shower until she had another loud orgasm and I spurted whatever I had into her fit body. Then we washed up, got dressed, and had pizza with soda. As usual, Taylor was loving, snuggled me, and we watched about half of AVENGERS ENDGAME before she stretched against me and purred "I'm tired babe. Want to go to bed and make out?"

I grinned and Taylor said "See? That's why I love you."

We kissed then Jessica pointed at the clock.

It was 9:03pm.

She laughed, "At least try to get some sleep?"

Taylor laughed as she held my hand "No promises."

... to be continued.

Do you like this story? If you do, you may be interested to know that the author also has several other stories on the site that are available to the members of the EroticStories.com FanClub!
Click here to read more about the FanClub.

Request from webmaster Art:
Don't forget to vote for this story in the yellow voting box below!
Authors really appreciate the votes and it only takes a few seconds!

Options: Plain text or PDF (fanclub only!) version for easy saving or printing

ESmail: Click here to send a private message to jwdoney (with ESmail, the site's internal message system)

Authors appreciate feedback! Please vote, and write to the authors to tell them what you liked or didn't like about the story!

Profile for jwdoney, incl. 283 stories Email: jwdoney@yahoo.com Add this author to your favorite author list Add this story to your favorite story list Send this story to me through email Recommend stories for further reading

Give your opinion about this part: (You can vote for each part separately) select here 1 (terrible) 2 .. 3 .. 4 .. 5 (reasonable) 6 .. 7 .. 8 .. 9 .. 10 (excellent)